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If Ah Should Faw
will ye heed ma beck an caw
The battle ends if Ah shood faw
So staun besides me proud an taw,
abide wae me, ma warts an aw
the battle noo, wae baith foresaw
Wae promised we wud not withdraw.
A’ve fired up ma new chainsaw,
protect mae way yer sword an draw
A’m feert that ye might drap the baw
It wid surely be the final straw
If awe alane Ah finally faw
An yer nae really thur at aw
................................................................. Tae catch me
.............................................................................................Tae save me
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“A tyrant is only a tyrant if you remain on your knees”
David Macleod 2014
The battle ends if Ah shood faw
So staun besides me proud an taw,
abide wae me, ma warts an aw
the battle noo, wae baith foresaw
Wae promised we wud not withdraw.
A’ve fired up ma new chainsaw,
protect mae way yer sword an draw
A’m feert that ye might drap the baw
It wid surely be the final straw
If awe alane Ah finally faw
An yer nae really thur at aw
................................................................. Tae catch me
.............................................................................................Tae save me
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“A tyrant is only a tyrant if you remain on your knees”
David Macleod 2014
Published 19th Feb 2018
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19th Feb 2018 11:59am
“A tyrant is only a tyrant if you remain on your knees”
Wise yer words ma friend.
Loved the poem also.
Wise yer words ma friend.
Loved the poem also.
21st Feb 2018 00:31am
thank you I do have some brain cells left :-))))
Glad you liked this one :-))))))
Glad you liked this one :-))))))
19th Feb 2018 1:47pm
21st Feb 2018 00:33am
I saw this as highlanders versus Zombies (lol)
thank you as always :-))))))))
thank you as always :-))))))))
20th Feb 2018 1:45am
Will you understand my beck and call
the battle ends and if I should fall
so stand beside me proud and tall
abide with me, all my warts and all
the battle … we both foresaw
we promised we would not withdraw
I have fired up my new chainsaw
protect me with your sword and draw
Im frightend you might drop the ball
it would surley be the final straw
if all alone I finally fall
and you never really thought at all
the battle ends and if I should fall
so stand beside me proud and tall
abide with me, all my warts and all
the battle … we both foresaw
we promised we would not withdraw
I have fired up my new chainsaw
protect me with your sword and draw
Im frightend you might drop the ball
it would surley be the final straw
if all alone I finally fall
and you never really thought at all
21st Feb 2018 00:33am
20th Feb 2018 11:31am
Hey, I’ve got your back ;) I stand proudly beside you, through every battle my love. This was a delight to read aloud!
I love you <3
I love you <3
21st Feb 2018 00:35am
Yeah you are so good at the Scottish accent if I remember right :-)))))))))))
Stand behind me it's safer (lol) Love you <3 <3 :-))))))))))
Stand behind me it's safer (lol) Love you <3 <3 :-))))))))))
