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On the low.

I�ve been on the low I�ve been takin my time. That�s a logic line. And I am out of my mind. Tell me why I have war commendations on my mantel with nothing else to show. Running out of places too go and I just have love I want too show. After what I�ve done why cant I be in love. �

Written by Telltal3

Published 17th Feb 2018

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Re. On the low.

Daibach

18th Feb 2018 9:07am

Whoa, slow down my friend. Don't beat yourself up. We all stand before the void waiting for God's answer. Let it come to you and suffer no more, brother. Your love is shining, believe me.

Best...David