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The words are wrong
The words are wrong, in this Radiohead song;
The words are wrong, in this Radiohead song.
The words are wrong; she wears me out.
The words are wrong, in this Radiohead song.
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Published 16th Feb 2018
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29th Mar 2018 2:37am
Interesting technique you're using with the repetition. I admit, I generally prefer a little more substance in what I read, but I felt like you were trying to play around with a creative style and if that's the case, I applaud the effort. Sometimes poetry is just about having fun trying new things.
If I missed the mark and this wasn't just a whimsical attempt at a new style, I might recommend trying to expound on the words, the 'wrong-ness' of them, etc. It would be nice to understand a little more about what the poem means.
If I missed the mark and this wasn't just a whimsical attempt at a new style, I might recommend trying to expound on the words, the 'wrong-ness' of them, etc. It would be nice to understand a little more about what the poem means.
30th May 2019 1:36pm
I always sing these lyrics to Radiohead's Fake Plastic Tree's song.
55 seconds into the YouTube video for Fake Plastic Tree's sing the title 'The Words are wrong'. (Instead of it wears her out).
This poem was just written for fun, for my own amusement.
"A green plastic watering can
For a fake Chinese rubber plant
In the fake plastic earth
That she bought from a rubber man
In a town full of rubber plans
To get rid of itself
It wears her out '(The words are wrong)'
It wears her out' (The words are wrong)'
It wears her out' (The words are wrong)'
It wears her out" '(The words are wrong)'
Fake Plastic Tree's - Radiohead
55 seconds into the YouTube video for Fake Plastic Tree's sing the title 'The Words are wrong'. (Instead of it wears her out).
This poem was just written for fun, for my own amusement.
"A green plastic watering can
For a fake Chinese rubber plant
In the fake plastic earth
That she bought from a rubber man
In a town full of rubber plans
To get rid of itself
It wears her out '(The words are wrong)'
It wears her out' (The words are wrong)'
It wears her out' (The words are wrong)'
It wears her out" '(The words are wrong)'
Fake Plastic Tree's - Radiohead
