Everyone could see the trapdoor but me

Always should focus on you. A stronger you will make you stronger in relationships. That’s just what I believe through. Great poem 😁

thank you so much! I completely agree.

Another deeply revealing write Jess! You speak volumes in your verse...
Seems like it's never easy to see the forest for the trees... like looking for your glasses when they are on your nose. But hindsight can only focus on the past and you are living in he moment. Whoever else may be to blame, look within for the answers. If you keep your own self-interests close to your heart, you will levitate above that which is beneath you...
J

I really do love reading your comments. Thank you for taking the time to write them out for me.

Very wise j, you are right.....in so many ways...hvd

I completely agree.

This is true with everyone great job

Thank you so much.

Some times it's hard to look under the rug while sweeping the dirt there, especially if it doesn't seem to accumulate.

Insightful write.

I've fallen through that door more than once. Concentrate on you first

Everyone could see the trapdoor but me?

yes?

Is that why it's so durn dark in here...