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Spectral Eyes
Looking into the window of my soul
with spectral eyes I spy a void inside
a dagger impales my heart one I placed there
The full spectrum of feelings flood in
wash me to the shore of enlightenment
seeing I must be grateful for what I have
I've traversed many mountains
to get to this place
still fighting my addictive nature
I must grab the hilt of the blade
pluck it from my heart
use it as a weapon of my own defense
(Thank you Gg,Shaman,Poetryman :)
with spectral eyes I spy a void inside
a dagger impales my heart one I placed there
The full spectrum of feelings flood in
wash me to the shore of enlightenment
seeing I must be grateful for what I have
I've traversed many mountains
to get to this place
still fighting my addictive nature
I must grab the hilt of the blade
pluck it from my heart
use it as a weapon of my own defense
(Thank you Gg,Shaman,Poetryman :)
Published 2nd Oct 2011
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2nd Oct 2011 7:48pm
2nd Oct 2011 8:05pm
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2011 10:22pm
I think you cause food for thought with this piece...
2nd Oct 2011 10:36pm
ty Alip for your kind and thoughtful comment..it's deeply appreciated..peace Crim :)
3rd Oct 2011 6:24pm
Exellent piece of introspection. My favorite poems are the ones that look within to answer the questions most important to us. And you are welcome! I hope we inspired you.
ty JJ your comments on my negative poem Fuck it which I deleted..made me realise how ungrateful it sounded..I have a lot to be grateful for..I have a pesimistic nature which I have to fight..ty again..peace Crim :)
4th Oct 2011 00:13am
4th Oct 2011 1:44am
You inspired me with the talks we've had and your positive out look to see the brighter side of things and appreciate where i've been and where i'm at..ty Gg peace Crim :)
6th Oct 2011 1:40am
the blunt nature in which you state your feelings is beautiful and puncturing.
6th Oct 2011 7:20pm
