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Yakh Dar Behesht
Dinner is over and I'm your dessert.
Lay me down and dig in.
Your head between my thighs.
Take your time, and enjoy.
Grip my ass and pull me close.
I like it when you take control.
Pulling the sheets with every move.
Hips grinding, I'm gliding
Your lips are like heaven and I love the ride.
Taste me and tease me
My body is yours
Lay me down and dig in.
Your head between my thighs.
Take your time, and enjoy.
Grip my ass and pull me close.
I like it when you take control.
Pulling the sheets with every move.
Hips grinding, I'm gliding
Your lips are like heaven and I love the ride.
Taste me and tease me
My body is yours
Published 11th Feb 2018
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11th Feb 2018 5:55am
11th Feb 2018 5:57pm
After-meal delight! Could visualise the dining table turning, with noise of clattering plates and cutlery, into the couple's bed!
"Taste me and tease me; my body is yours" comes across itself as a tease to the man.
BTW - how does the title translate?
"Taste me and tease me; my body is yours" comes across itself as a tease to the man.
BTW - how does the title translate?
It translates to Icey paradise a Persian sweet dessert.
Thank you Solomon!
XO
Brandie
Thank you Solomon!
XO
Brandie
12th Feb 2018 2:47pm
I appreciate that you make eating pussy still an act of dominance for the man in this case, as a pose to it being seen purely submissively, as it is in many cultures even many in the West still. I feel as though that wasn't the point of the poem, but nevertheless it shows intelligence regarding the contingency of sex: control is primal, pure, mental - the act a constantly evolving symbol that can be seen and interpreted from multiple sides. Far too often, from both male and female perspectives in poetry and such it feels far too submissive and cheesy for me to enjoy, but this was good.
10th Apr 2018 7:15am
most guys love desserts
as many lives are
simply like
dry desserts
your offer speaks of masculine concern
well done
as many lives are
simply like
dry desserts
your offer speaks of masculine concern
well done
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Feb 2019 10:53am
11th Oct 2018 6:02am
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