Yakh Dar Behesht

loved it...came at just the right time...Lawrence

Thank you Lawrence!
XO
Brandie

After-meal delight! Could visualise the dining table turning, with noise of clattering plates and cutlery, into the couple's bed!

"Taste me and tease me; my body is yours" comes across itself as a tease to the man.

BTW - how does the title translate?

It translates to Icey paradise a Persian sweet dessert.
Thank you Solomon!
XO
Brandie

I appreciate that you make eating pussy still an act of dominance for the man in this case, as a pose to it being seen purely submissively, as it is in many cultures even many in the West still. I feel as though that wasn't the point of the poem, but nevertheless it shows intelligence regarding the contingency of sex: control is primal, pure, mental - the act a constantly evolving symbol that can be seen and interpreted from multiple sides. Far too often, from both male and female perspectives in poetry and such it feels far too submissive and cheesy for me to enjoy, but this was good.

most guys love desserts
as many lives are
simply like
dry desserts

your offer speaks of masculine concern
well done