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cold's not the ocean
cold
is not the ocean
it's the ocean
that is
cold
perefect blend
beauty
danger
no matter
your love
it'll take you in
no discrimination
friend or foe
deeply happy
or
sunken in woe
ocean's calm
ocean's roar
either way
you'd come
for more
and they say
the ocean
is a cold
merciless killer
little
do they know
the peace
that lay
within
its tumult
is not the ocean
it's the ocean
that is
cold
perefect blend
beauty
danger
no matter
your love
it'll take you in
no discrimination
friend or foe
deeply happy
or
sunken in woe
ocean's calm
ocean's roar
either way
you'd come
for more
and they say
the ocean
is a cold
merciless killer
little
do they know
the peace
that lay
within
its tumult
Published 9th Feb 2018
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9th Feb 2018 4:37pm
wise write dearest Cold One
yes in the ocean's deep
there is tranquility..
love Raven
yes in the ocean's deep
there is tranquility..
love Raven
10th Feb 2018 7:33am
welcome
is the Peer admired.
welcome
is the kind & insightful review.
yes, underneath the tumult
lay the calm
the blue that dissolves
all blues!
appreciation.
immense!
is the Peer admired.
welcome
is the kind & insightful review.
yes, underneath the tumult
lay the calm
the blue that dissolves
all blues!
appreciation.
immense!
11th Feb 2018 10:47am
12th Feb 2018 8:48am
Welcome
dear Brother, dear Poet!!
humbling and honoring is your visit, review!!
appreciation.
immense!!
dear Brother, dear Poet!!
humbling and honoring is your visit, review!!
appreciation.
immense!!
18th Mar 2018 12:13pm
I so love the ocean, I live at the beach, usually floating on my back, tossed about having deep conversations with God. I love the simplicity of something so vast & serene that your talented pen captured so we'll. Absolutely lovin this write takes me to such a beautiful & peaceful place, thank you for writing & sharing this piece. Much Respect,
me
me
23rd Mar 2018 2:08pm
Welcome
is the peer!
welcome
is the review!
i get that..your love for the ocean. Not far from home either..
it's the - beauty in the eye of the beholder- case here. The kind and generous appreciation of a peer.
appreciation.
immense!
for the visit.
the honor.
is the peer!
welcome
is the review!
i get that..your love for the ocean. Not far from home either..
it's the - beauty in the eye of the beholder- case here. The kind and generous appreciation of a peer.
appreciation.
immense!
for the visit.
the honor.
