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Fall
Curtail all feelings
Numbing
Lithe touching
Drawing within
Tender curls
A nature too gentle
To be
In the shinning sun
Where a world of eyes
Made a child build walls
Cast iron
A grade thicker than judgment
Flesh not as soft as you knew it to be
Shave the sides in this night
Piercing into identity
Rising from pink hollowed layers of an organic cocoon
This next chapter
Is like a brand new life
Numbing
Lithe touching
Drawing within
Tender curls
A nature too gentle
To be
In the shinning sun
Where a world of eyes
Made a child build walls
Cast iron
A grade thicker than judgment
Flesh not as soft as you knew it to be
Shave the sides in this night
Piercing into identity
Rising from pink hollowed layers of an organic cocoon
This next chapter
Is like a brand new life
Published 1st Oct 2011
| Edited 2nd Oct 2011
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1st Oct 2011 6:18pm
This is beautiful..I love the flow..you have such a way with words..always pure art..peace Crim
1st Oct 2011 6:22pm
thank you kindly Crim ;)
Hey aren't you in the bay area? Buckethead is playing for free at Golden Gate park tonight
Hey aren't you in the bay area? Buckethead is playing for free at Golden Gate park tonight
1st Oct 2011 6:53pm
I wish I was in the Bay area but know about two hours away..thanks for the heads up though..peace Crim :)
1st Oct 2011 7:17pm
This piece confuses me, I'm not entirely sure where it's headed but perhaps that's me being simple. I do take satisfaction in this quote though. 'A grade thicker than judgment
Flesh not as soft as you knew it to be.' Kudos on that, it's clever.
Flesh not as soft as you knew it to be.' Kudos on that, it's clever.
2nd Oct 2011 5:38am
it is rather vague and pieces from all over my brain not cohenrently stitched together. It is about love and healing from lost relationships
