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AMOUREUX SE RENCONTRENT
Here in Bordeaux France
Wine writer, freelance
Hoping for romance
Crowded café glance
Blessed happenstance
She’s the one perchance
Beauty to entrance
Smile pleasure grants
Poised, alluring stance
Hepburn capri pants
Figure do enhance
Simple elegance
Sans extravagance
Seizing circumstance
Crossing the expanse
breathing in advance
Her heady fragrance
Screaming take the chance
Hi, my name is Lance
Do you like to dance?
Wine writer, freelance
Hoping for romance
Crowded café glance
Blessed happenstance
She’s the one perchance
Beauty to entrance
Smile pleasure grants
Poised, alluring stance
Hepburn capri pants
Figure do enhance
Simple elegance
Sans extravagance
Seizing circumstance
Crossing the expanse
breathing in advance
Her heady fragrance
Screaming take the chance
Hi, my name is Lance
Do you like to dance?
Published 6th Feb 2018
Author's Note
Inspired by the newly invented David Macleod
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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reading list entries 2
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6th Feb 2018 10:46pm
6th Feb 2018 11:04pm
Anonymous
6th Feb 2018 11:59pm
such a lovely and simple charming feel to this one, the scene feels enchanted.
the rhyming so effortless really adds that hint of optimism and confidence to the suitor's lines.
the rhyming so effortless really adds that hint of optimism and confidence to the suitor's lines.
7th Feb 2018 00:40am
Thank you Ani! What a wonderful comment. Yes, I did write him as pretty undaunted. You are an awesome source of encouragement.
Anonymous
7th Feb 2018 00:42am
you are welcome, i really enjoyed it
7th Feb 2018 10:35am
7th Feb 2018 7:14pm
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7th Feb 2018 7:17pm
Your comment is all the win I need. That it flowed so easily when read makes me very happy. Thank you for lifting my spirits.
Hepburn in capri pants, mmmm, I've always adored that look! I'm glad you gave it a try and were able to enter the same comp. I hope after you read mine it helped inspire you to do what you did - and you did it well!
7th Feb 2018 7:22pm
You did indeed inspire me to give it a go. Audrey Hepburn is my archetype of unassuming beauty. I get off on the rhythm of a challenge such as this.
1st Mar 2022 2:44pm
How beautifully nostalgic and melancholic to look back and read the words of such revered poets/poetess' that have sadly departed. It's an amazing opportunity and I'm incredibly thankful to have DUP and you, dear BB, as a sort of a keeper of an archive, allowing us an opportunity to look back.... and see.
I befriended David towards the end of his time on DUP, a little bit before he decided to leave and it was the best most fortuitous decision. I wish I could have known him longer /better, yet I'll also be so grateful for the little exchanges we did have.
I thank you for sharing your comp entry, dear BB. You did a wonderful job and definitely deserved to stand on the podium. Congrats!
Thank you for sharing some insights into Jade as well, it's nice to read her interactions, as I really didn't know her at all....
What a treat this was, thank you for bumping it!
🌹 - 💙
xo
I befriended David towards the end of his time on DUP, a little bit before he decided to leave and it was the best most fortuitous decision. I wish I could have known him longer /better, yet I'll also be so grateful for the little exchanges we did have.
I thank you for sharing your comp entry, dear BB. You did a wonderful job and definitely deserved to stand on the podium. Congrats!
Thank you for sharing some insights into Jade as well, it's nice to read her interactions, as I really didn't know her at all....
What a treat this was, thank you for bumping it!
🌹 - 💙
xo
