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A Variable
A movie playing in head
No, a porn video instead
The meta-syntactic variable
Thoughts that's unsharable:
Ack, bar, blarg, wibble, foo, fum, qux
Something that can't be procured
Inside lust
Hormones aren't secured
When ovaries are 'bout to bust
Roughly, strongly, mean & bad
Hands snatching, tugging, pulling so rad
Ride, ravage like savage & thrust
Ooomph of love, cries to cum-bust
Sticky, sexy, slimy & wet
Shimmering with juices (a view you'll never forget)
Still...
Only a variable to a bilido
Not a cock, but a dildo
It's just me and this movie of you
How much I want, you have no clue...
Appeasing thirst
Mind's a whole porn website
'Tis my wibble to not burst
Still not you despite
No, a porn video instead
The meta-syntactic variable
Thoughts that's unsharable:
Ack, bar, blarg, wibble, foo, fum, qux
Something that can't be procured
Inside lust
Hormones aren't secured
When ovaries are 'bout to bust
Roughly, strongly, mean & bad
Hands snatching, tugging, pulling so rad
Ride, ravage like savage & thrust
Ooomph of love, cries to cum-bust
Sticky, sexy, slimy & wet
Shimmering with juices (a view you'll never forget)
Still...
Only a variable to a bilido
Not a cock, but a dildo
It's just me and this movie of you
How much I want, you have no clue...
Appeasing thirst
Mind's a whole porn website
'Tis my wibble to not burst
Still not you despite
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Re. A Variable
6th Feb 2018 4:47am
beautiful Hanuel a very telling for real erotic
pleasing yourself to thoughts of him..
very sexy..
love Crim
pleasing yourself to thoughts of him..
very sexy..
love Crim
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Re: Re. A Variable
6th Feb 2018 4:50am
Thank you Crim lol
I greatly endear your visits to my works regardless
tis not the best
but I did have a ball in writing this
It's a light-hearted one but seems serious somehow lol
I am very grateful..
<3<3
H
I greatly endear your visits to my works regardless
tis not the best
but I did have a ball in writing this
It's a light-hearted one but seems serious somehow lol
I am very grateful..
<3<3
H
Re: Re. A Variable
6th Feb 2018 4:54am
I think it's great I think my write tonight only so so..
so I feel you we are own harshest critics..
love Crim
so I feel you we are own harshest critics..
love Crim
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Re. A Variable
6th Feb 2018 5:17am
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8th Feb 2018 1:00am
Re. A Variable
Gleefully playful and filled with the joy of self-loving. Very original in your creation of sounds through words. And the idea of a porn movie playing in your mind is just fabulous! Your imagery is playing in my mind like an erotic movie. Just visualizing this puts me in nirvana. You my girl are the cat's meow. ;-)
Hugs,
John
Hugs,
John
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Re: Re. A Variable
8th Feb 2018 1:03am
Thank you very much dear John!
Actually, believe it or-not, the words listed with such things as ack are real words I found... a type of variable.
I was worried I listed too much nouns and adjectives lol
glad I was able to play a movie , thank you so so much :)
<3
H
Actually, believe it or-not, the words listed with such things as ack are real words I found... a type of variable.
I was worried I listed too much nouns and adjectives lol
glad I was able to play a movie , thank you so so much :)
<3
H
Re. A Variable
6th Feb 2018 6:25am
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8th Feb 2018 1:04am
Re. A Variable
6th Feb 2018 12:37pm
Re: Re. A Variable
8th Feb 2018 1:06am
Thank you, thank you! :))
It was a hot n' sticky fun write indeed...
I am very grateful of your visit!
<3
H
It was a hot n' sticky fun write indeed...
I am very grateful of your visit!
<3
H
Re. A Variable
6th Feb 2018 2:48pm
That 'variable' sounds enticingly delicious to bare witness to lol.
A very sexy, hot spill my dearest...
A very sexy, hot spill my dearest...
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Re: Re. A Variable
8th Feb 2018 1:07am
Yes, the most intimate mathematical variable indeed...
yummy it was
I am very grateful of your visit!!
<3
H
yummy it was
I am very grateful of your visit!!
<3
H
Re. A Variable
6th Feb 2018 9:07pm
I think you need to get laid lol On a serious note, another great work of art from you. Great job!
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8th Feb 2018 1:08am
Re. A Variable
wonderful word play...we are blessed to have your talent
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
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16th Feb 2018 10:09pm
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Anonymous
8th Feb 2018 12:50pm
Hot and fun H - love it <3
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16th Feb 2018 10:09pm
Re. A Variable
23rd Feb 2018 9:03am
excellent fun slice of erotica - so cleverly done - enjoyed much :-))))))
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1st Mar 2018 4:57am
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Re: Re. A Variable
3rd Apr 2018 8:14am
well Glad I could fill with such!
I am honored by your wonderful comment..
Thank you!
Love,
H
I am honored by your wonderful comment..
Thank you!
Love,
H
Re. A Variable
Hanuel, how delightful to reread this. Your imagery flowed poetically as my eyes envisioned the scene you painted so playfully. This does what erotic poetry should do entices, teases, and inspires desire. Your use of language and words make for a heady creative vision. Imagining you alone thinking of your man so far away and giving in to your desire for him is a heavenly vision.
XoXo
John
XoXo
John
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Re: Re. A Variable
12th Aug 2018 5:11am
you are a heavenly vision with your descriptive poems...
you flatter me dear john!
thank you so much.... only a mere play with words..
Grateful to your support always,
Hanuel
you flatter me dear john!
thank you so much.... only a mere play with words..
Grateful to your support always,
Hanuel
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