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Allowance Of Sin
Rhythm, cadence, clutching claws, primal screams
Carried on winds of nascent nihilism
Scents, sounds, textures, and tactile surrender
Rapture undenied, intended, delivered
Willful sinners in depraved delight
The shadow of dark benevolence
Shall still their fears of damnation
Calm their reticence to indulge
Allow, and encourage the waves of decadent capitulation
Carried on winds of nascent nihilism
Scents, sounds, textures, and tactile surrender
Rapture undenied, intended, delivered
Willful sinners in depraved delight
The shadow of dark benevolence
Shall still their fears of damnation
Calm their reticence to indulge
Allow, and encourage the waves of decadent capitulation
Published 5th Feb 2018
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16th Mar 2018 10:19pm
I like your poem! I think the dual alliteration in each of the lines was well done. I would have liked to have seen that continued because by the end I had begun to expect it, but I still thought the last lines were very well done and held their own.
Good job!
Good job!
