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CHALK
(A repost)
Under a dove grey sky
run along home now children
spit-spot
before it again rains
‘Allo 'allo!
what ‘ave we here?
another drawing
very nearly washed away
by rain drops dripping
off the rose bush just adjacent
Care to join me ma’ lady?
arm-in-arm In a violet cloud
they disappear
landing on a large,luxurious
four-poster feather bed
In a posh parisian hotel room
At the foot lay
a brown paper package
tied up with string
how lovely!
inside a négligée
of the finest Japanese silk
The door flies open
in rush the penguins
bearing trays laden
with caviar and champagne
a bright copper kettle
with steaming Turkish coffee
and her favourite
apple strudel
Votre café mademoiselle
commenter prefere vous
Avec une sol cuillère de sucre
Merci beaucoup!
giving them two sardines each
kissing their foreheads
swooning they run from the room
Content
standing by the open window
Summer breeze caressing her cheeks
enrapturing Offenbach notes
by an unseen orchestra play
“Gaîté Parisienne ”
Angelic
illuminated by La Ville-Lumière below
from above soft moonbeams
making translucent her gown
accentuating practically perfect breasts
erect ruby nipples tent the sheer fabric
May I have this dance?
Into the strong arms swept
of her naked cavalier
pirouetting as one
libidinous pas de deux
moist tip of brick-hard chimney
with each turn grazes milky thigh
Satin sash loosed
seductive cover to the floor cascades
lavishing kisses
on every curve, peak, valley
tenderly exploring
fragrant secret recesses
Euphoric rise and fall
dear me!
this far surpasses
any carousel horse
Slaps cream-colored bottom red
oh my yes spank naughty nanny!
trot to gallop
Sings out in fortissimo coloratura
KITTEN WHISKERS!
and he CHAROOOOO!
Jolted awake by cannon fire
hey you down there!
bivouacked in the park
best step lively
the kite flyers soon arrive
with the Eiffel Tower in black chalk
on his face imprinted
to the azure sky he glances
satisfied grin
don’t stay away too long
my love
(Painting by Vicente Romero Redondo)
Under a dove grey sky
run along home now children
spit-spot
before it again rains
‘Allo 'allo!
what ‘ave we here?
another drawing
very nearly washed away
by rain drops dripping
off the rose bush just adjacent
Care to join me ma’ lady?
arm-in-arm In a violet cloud
they disappear
landing on a large,luxurious
four-poster feather bed
In a posh parisian hotel room
At the foot lay
a brown paper package
tied up with string
how lovely!
inside a négligée
of the finest Japanese silk
The door flies open
in rush the penguins
bearing trays laden
with caviar and champagne
a bright copper kettle
with steaming Turkish coffee
and her favourite
apple strudel
Votre café mademoiselle
commenter prefere vous
Avec une sol cuillère de sucre
Merci beaucoup!
giving them two sardines each
kissing their foreheads
swooning they run from the room
Content
standing by the open window
Summer breeze caressing her cheeks
enrapturing Offenbach notes
by an unseen orchestra play
“Gaîté Parisienne ”
Angelic
illuminated by La Ville-Lumière below
from above soft moonbeams
making translucent her gown
accentuating practically perfect breasts
erect ruby nipples tent the sheer fabric
May I have this dance?
Into the strong arms swept
of her naked cavalier
pirouetting as one
libidinous pas de deux
moist tip of brick-hard chimney
with each turn grazes milky thigh
Satin sash loosed
seductive cover to the floor cascades
lavishing kisses
on every curve, peak, valley
tenderly exploring
fragrant secret recesses
Euphoric rise and fall
dear me!
this far surpasses
any carousel horse
Slaps cream-colored bottom red
oh my yes spank naughty nanny!
trot to gallop
Sings out in fortissimo coloratura
KITTEN WHISKERS!
and he CHAROOOOO!
Jolted awake by cannon fire
hey you down there!
bivouacked in the park
best step lively
the kite flyers soon arrive
with the Eiffel Tower in black chalk
on his face imprinted
to the azure sky he glances
satisfied grin
don’t stay away too long
my love
(Painting by Vicente Romero Redondo)
Published 5th Feb 2018
| Edited 6th Feb 2018
Author's Note
A frisky homage to two favorite films
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6th Feb 2018 5:19am
Though I am not familiar with the films, I enjoyed this read for the sheer beauty of the wording in describing the scenes.
Nicely done, Bob
Nicely done, Bob
6th Feb 2018 5:32am
Thank you very much. I just thought the scenario romantic. I'll tell you the films in PM. You may know them.
Anonymous
6th Feb 2018 10:13pm
Romanticism continues to ooze out through another gorgeous write :)
6th Feb 2018 10:19pm
I just can't contain it :) No vanity intended.Can you tell I enjoy this genre? I am in to deep things and there's nothing deeper than romance. Could you tell what were my influences?
9th Feb 2018 6:36pm
you have always had a refined touch with erotic
this really is a sensory delight, Mon Ami
xo
this really is a sensory delight, Mon Ami
xo
9th Feb 2018 7:01pm
Finally, you're back. I miss you when you're gone. Thank you! Could you tell which movies were my inspiration? I knew you would appreciate the music references. I recently took down all of my erotica and it was like taking paintings off a museum wall...so as you clearly see I'm reposting :)
