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what a fool I am ..
out on the street
see the first woman I recall
ever loved me
seems I was wrong
turns out that woman
never loved me ..
Published 5th Feb 2018
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5th Feb 2018 3:59pm
5th Feb 2018 9:16pm
Funny and serious is this fine ink Paul...where has all the love gone from all my past loves?
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
6th Feb 2018 00:42am
It's interesting how much we realize we really didn't know when we face our past.
Good ink, Paul.
Good ink, Paul.
23rd Feb 2018 9:36am
Currently feel like the biggest fool on the planet - it's easy to fall into the trap :-((
Excellent thought provoking piece :-))))))
Excellent thought provoking piece :-))))))
24th Feb 2018 1:24am
