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Crimson Vows~with Black_Magik_Gypsy
erase the ache
eating away at my soul
let it all bleed out
& swirl down the drain
an abstract splattering of pain
a crimson river seeking
its source on its darkest days
return to the wielder of sorrow
who caused me to see red
a neon sign flashes this way out
telling me forget the life
that betrayed me
embrace death
he waits on bended knee
to be my betrothed
my one & only
my true darkness personified
leaking from my veins as black tar
spilt on my shadow
giving me the embrace which I need
death is my keeper
shading the life I once knew
Its beckoning call
shrouds me like a hood
with a slight dusk veil
a quick slash of the razor
& my sacred vows are said
I hear a voice from far away
say
"do you really wish to die?"
& I say
"I do"
*note a rather macabre write not indicative of how I feel.. just a creative collaboration
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 30th Jan 2018
| Edited 31st Jan 2018
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Re. Crimson Vows~with Black_Magik_Gypsy
Anonymous
30th Jan 2018 9:55pm
Was a real honor to collaborate with u dear crimsin
Its divine in darkness
Xoxo
Autumn
Its divine in darkness
Xoxo
Autumn
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Re: Re. Crimson Vows~with Black_Magik_Gypsy
30th Jan 2018 11:17pm
thank you beautiful Autumn for creating with me it was a great pleasure..
love Crimsin
love Crimsin
Re. Crimson Vows~with Black_Magik_Gypsy
Anonymous
30th Jan 2018 10:28pm
Final tercet nailed that. Maybe it shows my morbid disposition, but found it strangely uplifting! Good work.
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30th Jan 2018 11:18pm
thank you graciously Rob from us both your comment made me smile :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. Crimson Vows~with Black_Magik_Gypsy
30th Jan 2018 11:47pm
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31st Jan 2018 00:16am
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Re: Re. Crimson Vows~with Black_Magik_Gypsy
31st Jan 2018 00:15am
thank you beautiful Daniella from both Gypsy & I we enjoyed releasing our darkness creatively..
love you lady..
Brenda
love you lady..
Brenda
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Re: Re. Crimson Vows~with Black_Magik_Gypsy
2nd Feb 2018 00:53am
Re. Crimson Vows~with Black_Magik_Gypsy
Like a monologue written within the most stygian corners of the human psyche. Enjoyed this, Lady Crim and Gypsy.
- Void...
- Void...
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Re: Re. Crimson Vows~with Black_Magik_Gypsy
31st Jan 2018 1:12am
thank you graciously from us both Void for a beautifully dark comment..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. Crimson Vows~with Black_Magik_Gypsy
31st Jan 2018 2:51am
A seamless write ladies, I was enthralled and just might join you on the death march
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31st Jan 2018 3:20am
thank you graciously dearest Tim from us both Gypsy was a joy to create with..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Crimson Vows~with Black_Magik_Gypsy
2nd Feb 2018 00:02am
thank you graciously beautiful Kat from us both yes sometimes the dark just wants to be heard & so I let it speak..
I cherish you dear one..
love Brenda
I cherish you dear one..
love Brenda
Re. Crimson Vows~with Black_Magik_Gypsy
Anonymous
31st Jan 2018 3:29pm
The two of you have laid out a seductive dark love story and sealed it with the final words perfectly. Beautifully written and flawlessly merged. I love you, my beautiful Dark Angel
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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2nd Feb 2018 00:03am
thank you graciously beautiful Willow from us both for seeing the dark beauty in this..
I love you..
love Brenda
I love you..
love Brenda
Re. Crimson Vows~with Black_Magik_Gypsy
31st Jan 2018 8:51pm
I'm glad you end by saying this isn't how you really feel. This is very effective, macabre and entertaining without having to worry about where those Crimson vows may lead. A fine collaboration from you both, with your styles blending perfectly. Bravos!
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2nd Feb 2018 00:04am
thank you graciously Sir Crow from us both.. I love seeing you about you gifted me smiles :)
love Crim
love Crim
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