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thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
aching treachery slaughters the trust
celestial watchers spin the karmic wheel
the cosmic balance is off
it will be righted
thoughts of trust plague me
sisters fated in hope
never questioned in amber eyes
face a flood of lies
not allowing for growth
washed to the shore of illusion
where innocent faith was raped
& deceit was born
it vandalizes memories
marring all which was known
with mouths flapping on the wind
the vultures circle
seeking to devour beauty
held sacred inside the hearts
of those faithful
stolen before they can
be wrapped in its solace
tried & true oracles
never wearing a disguise
uncovered & unhidden
knowing all as truths
divining messages
plunging into unfulfilled
predestined by the Fates
given a chance to rebuild
intended for the weary of soul
words conveyed emotions
flesh connected love & devotion
the greed stricken wild eyed jealousy
will devour divinity
before it can be delivered
they wait at the gates
with a third eye I see
the demons who chase comfort
when held within strong hands
as lips spread willingly open
thieves of dreams
weaver & caster of spoiled gossip
sinking deep into barren lands
let the feces you fling on the wind
land in your face & disgrace you
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Re. thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
Anonymous
30th Jan 2018 7:29am
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Re: Re. thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
30th Jan 2018 8:32am
thank you dearest Ghost most graciously from Taryn & I you are deeply appreciated..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re: Re. thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
Anonymous
30th Jan 2018 8:39am
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Re: Re. thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
30th Jan 2018 8:45am
aw thank you dearest Ghost from us both..what a truly beautiful comment causing my heart to swell with joy :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re: Re. thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
Anonymous
30th Jan 2018 8:51am
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Re. thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
30th Jan 2018 7:35am
Re: Re. thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
30th Jan 2018 8:32am
Re. thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
30th Jan 2018 8:13am
I absolutely love this piece you two did together. Inwoven so beautifully. Great work!! Can’t wait to see more.
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Re: Re. thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
30th Jan 2018 8:33am
thank you beautiful Eswaller so happy to see you on our pages.. Taryn & I deeply appreciate you..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
30th Jan 2018 9:54am
The two of you did an amazing job spilling the ink in twining it together
Hats off too you both bow 🙇♀️ 🙇♂️
Hats off too you both bow 🙇♀️ 🙇♂️
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Re: Re. thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
30th Jan 2018 10:05am
thank you graciously dearest Epic One from both Taryn & I we always enjoy our time when we come together..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
30th Jan 2018 2:53pm
Re: Re. thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
30th Jan 2018 3:16pm
thank you graciously dearest Tim from both of us.. we enjoyed writing this..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
30th Jan 2018 3:32pm
"let the feces you fling on the wind
land in your face & disgrace you"
I truly believe, karma tips the scale
in the favor of justice served, when
supplied the weight of truth.
An enjoyed piece, sisters in arms.
land in your face & disgrace you"
I truly believe, karma tips the scale
in the favor of justice served, when
supplied the weight of truth.
An enjoyed piece, sisters in arms.
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Re: Re. thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
30th Jan 2018 3:36pm
thank you graciously beautiful Teri from Taryn & I.. Karma does indeed take care of business.. I deeply appreciate your support..
love Crim
love Crim
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Oct 2018 4:47am
30th Jan 2018 4:54pm
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Re: Re. thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
30th Jan 2018 4:56pm
thank you graciously beautiful Daniella from Taryn & I she will giggle as I did at being honorary Russians :)
that's awesome you know how to make a lady smile..
love Brenda
that's awesome you know how to make a lady smile..
love Brenda
Anonymous
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30th Jan 2018 4:59pm
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Re. thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
Anonymous
- Edited 31st Jan 2018 1:20am
31st Jan 2018 1:17am
My love, ever so grateful I am you connect with the emotions and pain I feel as doors close, open and have slam closed again, over and over this past turbulent year...on both my behalf and others as well...it comes no surprise to me what we each wrote separately, undirected was in sync and able to mesh beautifully...I truly love this ink...
We’ll have to do collabs this way more often! 🌻
I love you fiercely
yours always & forever
xoxoxox Taryn
We’ll have to do collabs this way more often! 🌻
I love you fiercely
yours always & forever
xoxoxox Taryn
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Re: Re. thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
31st Jan 2018 3:18am
thank you my love.. this it was wonderful just feeling each other's vibe without sharing verses until we were both done & coming as one into such an awesome message.. I love this one too it's special..
I love you passionately..
Brenda
I love you passionately..
Brenda
Re. thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
Anonymous
31st Jan 2018 3:19pm
It's as though you were writing one hand over the other's with the same quill. Your words align so perfectly and your thoughts so smoothly in sync. This is a strong message and so beautifully written. I love you so much, Dark Angel
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
2nd Feb 2018 00:50am
thank you graciously beautiful Willow from us both for feeling this write..
I love you..
love Brenda
I love you..
love Brenda
Re. thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
Anonymous
1st Feb 2018 10:05pm
To write like one like you both have here shows just how deep your connection is.
Just the sort of thing I needed to read right now <3
Just the sort of thing I needed to read right now <3
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Re: Re. thieves of dreams~with the beautiful Taryn
2nd Feb 2018 00:52am
thank you graciously beautiful Sophie from us both yeah it is deep bond between us i'm grateful.. I deeply appreciate you feeling us..
love Crim
love Crim