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Thin Line

Between the love and the hate...

Two people thought they are in love
With a smile they hold hands
Walking together in lover's paradise

One love the other as much as
The other love in different ways
They didn't meet one's expectations

One expecting love to much as
The other love the way he knows how
That made each other  feeling sad

Sadness eating them both out of
Their lover's paradise
Written by RuNe
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