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Re. The Other Us
26th Jan 2018 1:09am
Re. The Other Us
Anonymous
18th Feb 2018 4:06am
Very uniquely presented and genuine. Beautiful, simply.
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Re: Re. The Other Us
20th Feb 2018 6:30pm
Re. The Other Us
Anonymous
22nd Mar 2018 3:50pm
The nuances of intimacy and relationships are captured in this poem so beautifully. To be felt and seen as beautiful when being told otherwise for too long, it's a heady thing. Loved this one :-)
...Willow
...Willow
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Re: Re. The Other Us
22nd Mar 2018 8:53pm
This was such therapy. Writing about the love of my life is so easy - though oftentimes hard.
"To be felt and seen as beautiful..." - this part... thank you, Willow xo
"To be felt and seen as beautiful..." - this part... thank you, Willow xo
Re. The Other Us
6th Sep 2020 1:34pm
An uplifting end after the highs and lows:
Whole, broken or healing
We are beautiful.
Whole, broken or healing
We are beautiful.
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Re: Re. The Other Us
6th Sep 2020 2:22pm
Oh wow... this relationship ended a while back - what a blast from the past, but how it inspired my deepest thoughts and feelings... It feels like I am reading the words of someone else... Yes, an uplifting end indeed... thank you for your comment xo
Re. The Other Us
The up and downs we go through when we are in love. They all seem so worthwhile, the good and the bad, for they are just part of our greater love. This is so wonderfully penned, it captures the simple beauty of a true relationship. Loved!!
Thank you for the write.
Thank you for the write.
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Re: Re. The Other Us
7th Sep 2020 6:43am