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18th Jan 2018 7:40am
beautiful Atomik
I love this it gives me a peek
into your mindset..
I picture you playing with your lighter
having a little fun tonight,.
wonderful..
love Crim
I love this it gives me a peek
into your mindset..
I picture you playing with your lighter
having a little fun tonight,.
wonderful..
love Crim
18th Jan 2018 7:52am
Thank you! I'm glad Snugglebuck posted that competition because I totally forgot lunes were a thing. It's nice to not down little whimsical pieces :) Thank you for the love my love!
18th Jan 2018 1:34pm
To show off my age... I would go out clubbing (aka drinking) and return to a friend's house to watch the original run of Beavis and Butthead. What does this have to do with your poem? "Fire Fire Fire"... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bR4u63gQXU0
18th Jan 2018 6:06pm
Hell yeah! That's classic...I'm not seasoned enough to "get it" like you do haha! 😋
Stuff used to be funnier though, for real.
Stuff used to be funnier though, for real.
18th Jan 2018 4:38pm
19th Jan 2018 00:28am
Anonymous
19th Jan 2018 11:04pm
AtoMik.. truly dig this.. much love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
22nd Jan 2018 4:13am
20th Jan 2018 00:48am
such a bright idea for a haiku - loved it, you are so good at these :-)))))
22nd Jan 2018 4:13am
Says the haiku wizard himself! I'd settle for a sorcerer's apprentice (get the reference!?).
It's actually a lune though, which is a weird style just like haiku that I had utterly forgotten about! 5,3,5 instead of 5,7,5 :)
Do a few! You'd slay them!
It's actually a lune though, which is a weird style just like haiku that I had utterly forgotten about! 5,3,5 instead of 5,7,5 :)
Do a few! You'd slay them!
22nd Jan 2018 11:58am
Shit - can you tell that math is not my strong point (lmao) is "Lune" it's actual name?
Gonna try a few thank you for the info I'd never heard of these before :-))
Gonna try a few thank you for the info I'd never heard of these before :-))
22nd Jan 2018 2:47pm
Yeah man! I was reminded because there's a competition for them currently :)
Fuck math.
Fuck math.
