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Lotus imposition
Now into the deep funk of momentum soul
Spins our wheel around time's linear pole
The near miss of dual suns in an orbital accrue
Pythagoras would spit when one mention two,
A tetra helix column now standing in the mist
The fours rivers of Eden all flowing in a twist
13 petaled rose garden shows ornamental flow
Water of noon God seeding maternal water below,
The brazen serpent rod is leaning in Plato's cave
Show's a continuous model, a primeval sine wave
Eve planting seeds on the astral world mountain
An embryonic fruit grown from the holy fountain,
(A pulse of location but with no time duration)
(A movement of mind through a spatial relation)
As the self-embedding fruit tree sows our reality
So the seed base particle wave brings old duality
Infinity with an amplitude, infinity with a breath
Inhale our life existence, exhale the hour of death,
An octave spectrum forming a beam of white light
A decent of spiral fire that is burning into sight
"God is a verb not a noun", reads the book in the attic
Lower realms falling down, more dynamic than static,
A point (.) to a line(I) and then on to expanse(O)
The particle vibration will spin a natural dance
"Lord" as singular while "God" as inclusive
This geometric metaphor rings vibrating music...
Written by
runaway-mindtrain
Published 15th Jan 2018
| Edited 4th Feb 2019
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Re. lotus imposition
Anonymous
15th Jan 2018 9:10am
Funnily enough, was writing of Platonic cave when chanced on this. Have to read your words a few times, before the full nourishment begins to feed my brain. To be candid, don't always get them. But encourages thought - surely harbinger of all writers.
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Re: Re. lotus imposition
15th Jan 2018 6:04pm
Re. lotus imposition
15th Jan 2018 11:24pm
Such a cool write... one I have to read multiple times to understand...
Formation and effect taking upon ...
a concept of cryptic and mystical..
dark mood... while I vision these holy life...
spiritual and refreshing....
Consider me as one of your biggest fan girl Jeff..
Lots of love......<3<3<3
H
Formation and effect taking upon ...
a concept of cryptic and mystical..
dark mood... while I vision these holy life...
spiritual and refreshing....
Consider me as one of your biggest fan girl Jeff..
Lots of love......<3<3<3
H
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Re: Re. lotus imposition
16th Jan 2018 1:06am
thank you very much sweetie...I really appreciate your continued support
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
Re. lotus imposition
17th Jan 2018 00:27am
Seriously mindtrain, as you do. This intelligent, educated kind of bullshit is what I like best. To see the Universe for what it is takes more than words. It's how they are expressed. And here, my friend, this piece gets the highest points as the very best.
Dai
Dai
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Re: Re. lotus imposition
17th Jan 2018 4:42am
a humbling comment...only a poet as yourself can give a response that is a poem in of itself...
I really appreciate it
J
I really appreciate it
J
Re. lotus imposition
17th Jan 2018 5:51am
A pantheistic poem of immense proportions...it's all made of stars...it's all a Verb and as Heraclitus said, "One cannot step into the same river twice...but the Zen Master smiled and replied, "You cannot step into the same river even once my dear Greek friend. Damn great ink R.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. lotus imposition
17th Jan 2018 6:18am
Re. lotus imposition
17th Jan 2018 7:36am
Great competition entry! Thanks for posting it. Very "trippy" and stimulating to the intellect.
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Re: Re. lotus imposition
17th Jan 2018 10:11am
Re. lotus imposition
Anonymous
17th Jan 2018 9:16pm
You painted everything in creation vividly in my head here, an immense view.
(Your intelligence is way beyond me and I had to read a few times lol)
(Your intelligence is way beyond me and I had to read a few times lol)
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Re: Re. lotus imposition
17th Jan 2018 9:23pm
thank you...it is old philosophy...I am just making a rhyme of some of the ideas...it was all expressed in times past poetically anyway...I am just along for the ride taking pictures of the godhead's creation...
much love
Jeff
much love
Jeff
Re. lotus imposition
20th Jan 2018 12:54pm
It's fun enough to know that "God is a verb not a noun", and it shouldn't be surprising this work is from a lefty introverted musician...
Don't know how those math proper nouns become important roles in this poem, but it's good to read this and be inspired by this...
Love the creative and refreshing ideas!
much much love
RoseJasmine
Don't know how those math proper nouns become important roles in this poem, but it's good to read this and be inspired by this...
Love the creative and refreshing ideas!
much much love
RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. lotus imposition
25th Jan 2018 7:23am
you are so very supportive...I can feel the love you send...
love back
Jeff
love back
Jeff
Re. lotus imposition
Anonymous
1st Mar 2018 10:25am
Masterpiece...
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1st Mar 2018 1:33pm
Re: Re. lotus imposition
Anonymous
1st Mar 2018 6:11pm
thank you sweetie...
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Re. Lotus imposition
5th Feb 2019 5:08am
"This geometric metaphor rings vibrating music..." ...& you pluck the soul strings deep in the details in the forms ..that feels to this rustic one in sacred haze of The One Infinite ...gushing within & taking flights.. wordless. before your created poetic matrices.. write on x:)
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Re: Re. Lotus imposition
5th Feb 2019 5:32am
Dearest Uma,...So pleased this resonated with you...Your comments are very valuable to me...
love
Jeff
love
Jeff