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Diligence in pleasing lives
Negligence in pleasing self
How can such a paradox live within one?
In giving pleasure to others
Does she attain pleasure to self
Either way
We are all humans
Blinded
Jumping at chances to pleasure self
Negligence in pleasing self
How can such a paradox live within one?
In giving pleasure to others
Does she attain pleasure to self
Either way
We are all humans
Blinded
Jumping at chances to pleasure self
Published 9th Jan 2018
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I think making others happy goes a long way into pleasing ourselves. Those who love to love, love seeing others happy. I love your poem.
9th Jan 2018 5:38pm
9th Jan 2018 11:55pm
Very thoughtful, we all feel the urge to have pleasure at the expense of others.
Well done
Well done
10th Jan 2018 10:49pm
11th Jan 2018 5:07am
I do agree with the great Greek Philosopher, Epicurus...pleasure is the goal...but then it is a fine line between pleasure and pain. A great piece of existential ink Crystalize.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
11th Jan 2018 5:33am
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3rd May 2018 7:31pm
Crystal, I like the message and the conundrum in this piece. Many would say that the only way to fully pleasure yourself is to pleasure another. I think the core of the question, for me at least, is love of oneself. Brava!
