Poems
Spoken Word
Groups
Forums
Competitions
Poets
Toggle navigation
Create Account
Log In
Poems and Stories
Spoken Word Poetry
Groups
Forums
Competitions
Poets and Writers
Search
Help
This website requires Javascript to work properly, please enable Javascript in your web browser settings.
Welcome to Deep Underground Poetry. This website uses cookies.
Continue
Find Out More
Poems
Spiritual
Edible Words - a Haiku
deepundergroundpoetry.com
Edible Words - a Haiku
Taste golden apples
In a basket of silver
Those edible words
Written by
EdibleWords
Published
7th Jan 2018
Like This?
Poems by Author
Comment
#humankind
#identity
#myself
#SelfReflection
#spiritual
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes
2
reading list entries
0
comments
4
reads
583
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re. Edible Words - a Haiku
LunasChild8
7th Jan 2018 10:54pm
Nice haiku! Golden apples mixing nicely with the silver basket. "Those edible words" allowing me to imagine the succulent taste of the sweet, delicious apples, (one of my favorite fruit).
Read poems by LunasChild8
0
Re: Re. Edible Words - a Haiku
EdibleWords
7th Jan 2018 11:12pm
Thank you for the killer feedback. It is a pleasure joining this group so far!
Read poems by EdibleWords
Re: Re. Edible Words - a Haiku
LunasChild8
7th Jan 2018 11:13pm
You're welcome. Keep on uploading, and welcome to DUP. I'm new to this site as well.
Read poems by LunasChild8
0
Re: Re. Edible Words - a Haiku
EdibleWords
8th Jan 2018 00:10am
Thank you and I have shared two more today. Enjoy.
Read poems by EdibleWords
Latest Forum Discussions
SPEAKEASY
In the News
Today 5:08pm by ajay
1
...
6
7
8
9
10
COMPETITIONS
DREAM TALK
Today 11:52am by PAR
(PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
SPEAKEASY
The Gathering Place ( Modalities of Divination )
Today 11:27am by Ahavati
(Tams)
1
...
138
139
140
141
142
SPEAKEASY
Music Thread ~
Today 11:07am by ajay
1
...
182
183
184
185
186
COMPETITIONS
Flow Slow
Today 3:53am by toniscales
(Lost Girl)
COMPETITIONS
Intense
Today 3:34am by toniscales
(Lost Girl)
1
2
Online Now
×
Close
Online Now
AfterSexDilemma
Artemis
Billy_Snagg
ajay
KristinaX
TheOralizer
fianaturie8
Mstrmnd1923
Vision_of_insanity
Anne-Ri999
adagio
DevilsChild
magichearts
COOPCAT
a_methyste
Rew
Members Online: 16
Close
×
Close
Error
Close