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The Lonely Highway
Wish I could fly to you
but what if there is no other choice
Driving my budget vehicle
with a compact backpack
and a navy-blue notebook
I traverse
from the earth to universe
from Taiwan to Venus
I promised that
never let you shed a tear
therefore, I put my car in gear
The view outside fades away
images of you come my way
memories, passions, loneliness
running along the highway
This highway has been frosty
Athens, Dallas, Los Angeles
it’s snowing in every city
At a strange spine-biting street
my shaking hand spilt a hot coffee
left a scarlet scar on my knee
I am like Saint-Exupery and the Little Prince
looking for some precious faiths
somewhere beyond the extreme
something lies in my dream
I know they are in you
and I believe it's true
I am like an ancient pilgrim
across the Arabian Desert
A believer who forgot beliefs after birth
bleeding one’s knees
staggering through the journey
strewn with glass pieces
to reach the sacred place
On the lonely highway
somewhere, still far way
moonshine, sunrise, sunset
It’s snowing at every station
I am wondering
you must be my destination
but what if there is no other choice
Driving my budget vehicle
with a compact backpack
and a navy-blue notebook
I traverse
from the earth to universe
from Taiwan to Venus
I promised that
never let you shed a tear
therefore, I put my car in gear
The view outside fades away
images of you come my way
memories, passions, loneliness
running along the highway
This highway has been frosty
Athens, Dallas, Los Angeles
it’s snowing in every city
At a strange spine-biting street
my shaking hand spilt a hot coffee
left a scarlet scar on my knee
I am like Saint-Exupery and the Little Prince
looking for some precious faiths
somewhere beyond the extreme
something lies in my dream
I know they are in you
and I believe it's true
I am like an ancient pilgrim
across the Arabian Desert
A believer who forgot beliefs after birth
bleeding one’s knees
staggering through the journey
strewn with glass pieces
to reach the sacred place
On the lonely highway
somewhere, still far way
moonshine, sunrise, sunset
It’s snowing at every station
I am wondering
you must be my destination
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Re. Lonely Highway
6th Jan 2018 5:39pm
lots of snow in this dream sequence, Jasmine...glad you went to Venus...this is something I'll have to read again...and digest slowly...as usual I loved your work....:X
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Re: Re. Lonely Highway
7th Jan 2018 12:32pm
It's snowing heavily in the western countries, isn't it? so I was imagining driving a car and running on the highway...it would be fun to see the white...thank you Lawrence for reading and commenting.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
Re. Lonely Highway
7th Jan 2018 00:22am
"On the lonely highway
somewhere, still far way
moonshine, sunrise, sunset
It’s snowing at every station
wandering
Where is my destination"
what a wonderous journey....memories and hopeful travels to see the world and to be with the loving one...
love
Jeff
somewhere, still far way
moonshine, sunrise, sunset
It’s snowing at every station
wandering
Where is my destination"
what a wonderous journey....memories and hopeful travels to see the world and to be with the loving one...
love
Jeff
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Re: Re. Lonely Highway
7th Jan 2018 12:37pm
I have imagined that the journey would be so much fun even though it seems lonely. Thank you Jeff my dear for the nice comment.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
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7th Jan 2018 00:58am
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Re: Re. Lonely Highway
7th Jan 2018 12:51pm
Glad you this piece made you think of the great music. It's a huge compliment to me. Thank you my dear Silence for being supportive to me.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
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7th Jan 2018 1:42am
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Re: Re. Lonely Highway
7th Jan 2018 1:04pm
Thank you John for being so supportive to me. I love dreaming no matter what would happen and quite enjoyed the journey while writing this poem...
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
Re. Lonely Highway
Anonymous
7th Jan 2018 2:18am
This is remarkable. High level description. I enjoyed this.
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Re: Re. Lonely Highway
7th Jan 2018 1:08pm
Nice to see you back Mercy. I have already listened to your music...they are very nice. I guess you are a rocker....appreciate to have your read and comment.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
Re. Lonely Highway
7th Jan 2018 5:48am
A journey written nicely...
and the destination..
A way to someone's heart can be quite the challenge.. but once you've reached it,
after all the snows and hours and hours through long road..
The feeling of warmth, of their smiles, and short moments of bliss are truly worth it.
Love<3<3
H
and the destination..
A way to someone's heart can be quite the challenge.. but once you've reached it,
after all the snows and hours and hours through long road..
The feeling of warmth, of their smiles, and short moments of bliss are truly worth it.
Love<3<3
H
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Re: Re. Lonely Highway
7th Jan 2018 1:16pm
Dear H, thank you for the knid words. Glad you can feel the warmth even though it seems biting cold in the poem. Truly appreciate your love and support.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
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7th Jan 2018 11:09am
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Re: Re. Lonely Highway
7th Jan 2018 1:58pm
You do have a great sense with words. While writing, I did think of a Chinese song, maybe more or less it influenced me. Thank you Todski for spending time reading this piece, and appreciate your nice feedback....
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
Re. Lonely Highway
7th Jan 2018 3:14pm
Re: Re. Lonely Highway
7th Jan 2018 3:47pm
Thank you Jay for spending time reading. It's my fantasy...I will keep safe if I go, and I will visit you too...
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
Re: Re. Lonely Highway
7th Jan 2018 9:36pm
i have a feeling i would really like it if we could meet in person. then we could journey the lonely highway together. :)
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Re: Re. Lonely Highway
8th Jan 2018 00:19am
Re. The Lonely Highway
8th Jan 2018 10:30pm
such a beautiful and tender write - made my heart melt :-)))))))
Lovely :-))))))
Lovely :-))))))
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Re: Re. The Lonely Highway
8th Jan 2018 10:49pm
Dear David, thank you for the nice comment. Glad it could melt your heart. Your words mean a lot to me.
Happy New Year David!
Much love
RoseJasmine
Happy New Year David!
Much love
RoseJasmine
Re: Re. The Lonely Highway
8th Jan 2018 11:59pm
Happy New Year to you too - I hope your New Year is full of love and laughter :-)))))
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Re: Re. The Lonely Highway
9th Jan 2018 00:41am
Thank you so much dear David. That's what I want to say to you too :-)))))
Re. The Lonely Highway
10th Jan 2018 11:09pm
Re: Re. The Lonely Highway
11th Jan 2018 3:05am
Dear Misan, thank you for visiting me and sharing your thought. So glad you like this. I love the moment while I was writing it...the journey will be fun if I really take it some day...
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
Re. The Lonely Highway
Anonymous
13th Jan 2018 8:21am
Love day dreaming and allowing my mind to wander places... loved the trip you took me on here, could visualise every part <3
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Re: Re. The Lonely Highway
13th Jan 2018 8:31am
So glad it can have your read and comment. I an honored. Thank you so much for the support.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
Re. The Lonely Highway
Anonymous
25th Jan 2018 3:24am
Awe Rose.......how I felt this as I silently traveled along with you.......feeling each emotion from town to town......outstanding ink my friend.......luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. The Lonely Highway
25th Jan 2018 3:31am
I love yours too my dear friend.Glad you enjoyed the journey. Thank you for the read and commenting. luv & hugs xo :)
Rosejasmine
Rosejasmine
Re. The Lonely Highway
14th Feb 2018 2:21am
Rose, a beautifully painted soul search. Your words teach me that risks must be taken to achieve our dreams. I love your down to earth view of transportation. No rocket ships, magic wands, or mystical magic carpet but rather an economy car and spiritual aspirations.
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Re: Re. The Lonely Highway
14th Feb 2018 2:43am
Dear Gahddess, your comment made me smile. Yea, I am the one who is always very practical even in dreams.
Thank you so much for the read and thought sharing. Your words encourage me a lot.
much love
RoseJasmine
Thank you so much for the read and thought sharing. Your words encourage me a lot.
much love
RoseJasmine