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Jade
She sat eagerly,
Talking to me
In dog language
About how it's done
Ball visible in my hand
Every muscle taught
She springs into retrieval mode
A streak of red racing
To catch the ball
Hurtling in space just ahead
Of her nose
Grasping it out of thin air,
Racing back
Dropping it at my feet
Waiting, with great anticipation
Of the next
Throw
Talking to me
In dog language
About how it's done
Ball visible in my hand
Every muscle taught
She springs into retrieval mode
A streak of red racing
To catch the ball
Hurtling in space just ahead
Of her nose
Grasping it out of thin air,
Racing back
Dropping it at my feet
Waiting, with great anticipation
Of the next
Throw
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Re. Jade
6th Jan 2018 3:34am
So lucky she is to have that loving launcher.
Bet she can speak with her eyes as well.
Long haired Lab's owned my heart for 3 years now.
Love this piece
Bet she can speak with her eyes as well.
Long haired Lab's owned my heart for 3 years now.
Love this piece
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Re: Re. Jade
25th May 2021 10:56pm
Thank you so much Tryst for your thoughtful comments .. they are such fun, loving babies. She does speak with her eyes ♥️
Re. Jade
6th Jan 2018 8:29am
Re: Re. Jade
25th May 2021 10:57pm
Thank you so much Rebel Phoenix for your thoughtful comments .. greatly appreciated
Re. Jade
Anonymous
6th Jan 2018 10:13am
Love animals, so this really worked for me.

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Re. Jade
6th Jan 2018 6:57pm
This was a joy to read! The image was vivid and adorable, je! Fun write! 😘
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Re: Re. Jade
25th May 2021 10:58pm
Thank you so much RainC for your fun and thoughtful comments .. greatly appreciated
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Anonymous
6th Jan 2018 8:03pm
I didn't realize how much I needed to read something so buoyant and joyful this morning. The energy of a dog is a thing to be cherished. :-)
...Willow
...Willow

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Anonymous
7th Jan 2018 4:04pm
aww how precious , warms my heart...

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Re. Jade
9th Jan 2018 00:22am
Re. Jade
17th Feb 2018 11:52pm
Re: Re. Jade
25th May 2021 10:59pm
Thank you so much bcpoet for your fun and thoughtful comments .. greatly appreciated