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Ritual
The quiet touch of an excited man with lust on his lips and my hips in his hands.
We dance the dance of a modern mating ritual.
Eye contact
No words
Hips grinding
Lips tingling
You can tell a lot from a man in the way he reacts to the dip and the curve in the small of your back.
Dancing can tell you a lot if you listen, I'll explain how I like it just pay attention.
Songs coming to an end and now is his time, excitement is building just one little line.
"Hey ma, hit me at the end of the night"
A miss
A fail
You blew it you tool
A deeper connection, passion ensue, my body is saying now, not that hood shit see you later.
Why are the ones with passion in hiding?
The lovers
The poets
The real men worth riding.
Published 2nd Jan 2018
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Anonymous
2nd Jan 2018 7:58am
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2nd Jan 2018 4:29pm
2nd Jan 2018 8:02am
many women
pull in smaller guys
as they r now hags
but ung ones know
the meaning of the touch
how he'd
flow
blow
or go
pull in smaller guys
as they r now hags
but ung ones know
the meaning of the touch
how he'd
flow
blow
or go
2nd Jan 2018 4:33pm
2nd Jan 2018 8:47am
I think you mean "EXCITED man" - "exited" implies coitus interruptis, which would be inapt for the pre-coital setting you probably mean to create.
This poem expresses Robert Frost's adage about dancing being "the vertical expression of the horizontal desire".
I warm to the wistful heartfelt end, which I am sure some male readers may want to say "Here!" to!
Why are the ones with passion in hiding?
The lovers
The poets
The real men worth riding.
This poem expresses Robert Frost's adage about dancing being "the vertical expression of the horizontal desire".
I warm to the wistful heartfelt end, which I am sure some male readers may want to say "Here!" to!
Why are the ones with passion in hiding?
The lovers
The poets
The real men worth riding.
2nd Jan 2018 4:32pm
Thank you Solomon for that catch, sometimes we read it too many times to see our mistakes. I appreciate it.
Thank you for taking the time to read as well!
XO
B
Thank you for taking the time to read as well!
XO
B
4th Jan 2018 3:06am
" Why are the ones with passion in hiding?
The lovers
The poets
The real men worth riding." 😘
You a releasing a dark beast on this cold, snowy Carolina night. I liked the two things you pointed out here: First of all, the desire and passion of your wanting that any real man would have captured and held on to. This appeals to my musical and artistic sensibilities. (I love intimate dancing) and then I like the way you point out his "shortcoming" Great compare and contrast going on making for a very interesting read. (I love an intelligent author) Great stuff Ms xBrandiex 😘
The lovers
The poets
The real men worth riding." 😘
You a releasing a dark beast on this cold, snowy Carolina night. I liked the two things you pointed out here: First of all, the desire and passion of your wanting that any real man would have captured and held on to. This appeals to my musical and artistic sensibilities. (I love intimate dancing) and then I like the way you point out his "shortcoming" Great compare and contrast going on making for a very interesting read. (I love an intelligent author) Great stuff Ms xBrandiex 😘
4th Jan 2018 3:23am
Thank you again Mr M.
I sure do appreciate a good beast within!
Stay warm
XO
Brandie
I sure do appreciate a good beast within!
Stay warm
XO
Brandie
4th Jan 2018 3:47am
.....only thing better is a werewolf completely loose, free and hungry 😊 #doggietreats
4th Jan 2018 3:09am
BTW........do you know of this song? Some parts of it made me think of you
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DVx8L7a3MuE 💞
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DVx8L7a3MuE 💞
4th Jan 2018 3:22am
Hmm 🤔 you know I may have heard that song a time or two maybe some day I will share with you the meaning behind the murderous mermaid that song is about 😉
4th Jan 2018 5:23am
23rd Jan 2018 00:20am
Lol real men in hiding?
There may not be any where u are...
I know some of us would never bounce, when gifted an offer to pounce lol...
Sexy stuff...
There may not be any where u are...
I know some of us would never bounce, when gifted an offer to pounce lol...
Sexy stuff...
23rd Jan 2018 1:25am
Poetik,
They are scarce around here that's for sure. Thank you for reading and commenting!
XO
Brandie
They are scarce around here that's for sure. Thank you for reading and commenting!
XO
Brandie
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Feb 2019 10:53am
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