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Following Down
Flesh melting off bones
Skeletal form holds last bit of helpless life
Begging for guidance
Believing is all there's left to do
Pray upon heavens for mercy
Deceived into thinking
Selfish ways were forgiven
Raise my head I gaze up
Damned angels hold my hand
I follow their lead
Down the stairs into darkness
Bid farewell to my flightless wings
I tear them apart
Refresh self with newly found magic
Skeletal form holds last bit of helpless life
Begging for guidance
Believing is all there's left to do
Pray upon heavens for mercy
Deceived into thinking
Selfish ways were forgiven
Raise my head I gaze up
Damned angels hold my hand
I follow their lead
Down the stairs into darkness
Bid farewell to my flightless wings
I tear them apart
Refresh self with newly found magic
Published 29th Dec 2017
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Anonymous
29th Dec 2017 11:42am
Really vivid imagery created in this write. Well done :-)
29th Dec 2017 10:53pm
29th Dec 2017 5:04pm
Flesh melting off bones
Skeletal form holds last bit of helpless life
Begging for guidance
Believing is all there's left to do
Wonderful expression of darkness, pain, and rebirth
Well penned my dear
~Wicked
Skeletal form holds last bit of helpless life
Begging for guidance
Believing is all there's left to do
Wonderful expression of darkness, pain, and rebirth
Well penned my dear
~Wicked
29th Dec 2017 10:53pm
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30th Dec 2017 2:38am
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1st Jan 2018 2:13am
1st Jan 2018 2:22am
We all need guidance in life, a thought if someone would just show us the way to freedom. Thoughtful and pleasant to read.
1st Jan 2018 8:47am
