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Re. Ethereal
Anonymous
28th Dec 2017 6:49pm
Your poetry always evoke such emotion and thought pondering. To pick and choose, discarding some memories and clinging to others, this could have unintended circumstances. Everything is so tied together, isn't it? And it wouldn't hurt if it didn't matter - at some point in time. And that makes it precious. Another gorgeous penning of truth untarnished. :-)
...Willow
...Willow
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Re: Re. Ethereal
28th Dec 2017 7:35pm
Why do your comments always make me shed a tear? They are all so poetic and heartfelt. It's like a joyous and welcoming accompaniment to every piece I write. As in my poem, each time you share your thoughts to what I write, it evokes a sense of: "I see you. I value you. You too deserve the adoration you so freely give away" - something that has been sorely lacking during a time I needed encouragement in my life. Thank you, thank you. You encourage me.
"Everything is so tied together, isn't it? And it wouldn't hurt if it didn't matter - at some point in time" - I am right here, in this moment. These 'echoes' :)
"Everything is so tied together, isn't it? And it wouldn't hurt if it didn't matter - at some point in time" - I am right here, in this moment. These 'echoes' :)
Re. Ethereal
28th Dec 2017 7:51pm
Re. Ethereal
7th Jan 2018 6:39pm
learnt a new word 'komorebi'...thank you...reminds me of old Cat Stevens song..."sunlight came softly through the window today..."...enjoyable read
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Re: Re. Ethereal
14th Jan 2018 4:09pm
Thank you too, for gracing me with reading and sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated x
Re. Ethereal
7th Sep 2020 6:20am
Just wow!! I see you. I value you. You too deserve the adoration you so freely give away. No truer words were spoken. Good, kind hearted people should be appreciated for who they are. Hopefully, good or bad, that is what your memories show. They remind you of who you are, what you deserve, the love you have to give.
Thank you for the write.
Thank you for the write.
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Re: Re. Ethereal
7th Sep 2020 6:52am
Thank you so much. I'm reading these poems you've commented on and I'm thinking: where is this person who shared these thoughts, who wrote this piece? I truly hope that I find my way back to her.
Re: Re. Ethereal
7th Sep 2020 3:26pm
She is not gone, just simply lost, waiting for you to find her. You know where to look, those places you haven’t visited in a while. I can feel your desire to connect with her. Maybe try writing about a conversation between the two of you.
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Re: Re. Ethereal
7th Sep 2020 5:57pm
I appreciate your encouragement :)
Lol. I think we'd snap at each other right now... Argh... I'm awakening from my winter slumber which is usually when I am my most creative... but I'll try. Thank you for that idea! x
Lol. I think we'd snap at each other right now... Argh... I'm awakening from my winter slumber which is usually when I am my most creative... but I'll try. Thank you for that idea! x