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3:56
No sleep.
Space heater failing to warm me
It's 3:56 and I can't shut down.
I'll be dead, Shaun style of course.
Encountering all walking dead and
Others who spent time painting
And texting and killing?
If tuning in to see intent and such
Were my skill set, I'd be awake anyway.
Considering conditions and factors watching stone cold killers perform as actors.
Definitely a better reason for this fucking phone in my hands and to hell with a space heater.
GT-R in my driveway instead of the beater.
But skills like this only sour never sweeter.
I'll never know though and you won't either.
Space heater failing to warm me
It's 3:56 and I can't shut down.
I'll be dead, Shaun style of course.
Encountering all walking dead and
Others who spent time painting
And texting and killing?
If tuning in to see intent and such
Were my skill set, I'd be awake anyway.
Considering conditions and factors watching stone cold killers perform as actors.
Definitely a better reason for this fucking phone in my hands and to hell with a space heater.
GT-R in my driveway instead of the beater.
But skills like this only sour never sweeter.
I'll never know though and you won't either.
Published 28th Dec 2017
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28th Dec 2017 10:27am
"If tuning in to see intent and such
Were my skill set, I'd be awake anyway. "
raw for real write
it seems you have a lot on your mind
that may be haunting you..
may we both find sleep tonight..
fucking real write..
love Crim
Were my skill set, I'd be awake anyway. "
raw for real write
it seems you have a lot on your mind
that may be haunting you..
may we both find sleep tonight..
fucking real write..
love Crim
28th Dec 2017 11:09am
Thank you for your time and consideration.
And yeah my brain is always surprising me lol...I have went into old stuff and I have no idea where the hell it comes from,i honestly don't even remember or recognize it in some cases. I don't date anything so I guess those are the ones not meant for me.
And yeah my brain is always surprising me lol...I have went into old stuff and I have no idea where the hell it comes from,i honestly don't even remember or recognize it in some cases. I don't date anything so I guess those are the ones not meant for me.
28th Dec 2017 10:44am
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28th Dec 2017 11:14am
It's not bad... and almost all the soundtrack is queen so you can get something for the buck. It's comedic and hella English I believe or British. Same gray skies so lol
28th Dec 2017 11:50am
Anonymous
28th Dec 2017 11:54am
Good honest write. Love inclusion of film - whenever things get on top for me get lost in a film. Shaun is very British.
28th Dec 2017 1:20pm
Right on.
Imagine for a second the possibility of all that shit I put down being totally fogazyi.
Of course it's apparent that I'm actually still sitting in front of the space heater and wishing that GT-R Was idle and gassed up lmao..
I always look at angle of the picture instead of the picture or the extra in the background who completely failed his debut..
Gives me fuel and fodder.
Imagine for a second the possibility of all that shit I put down being totally fogazyi.
Of course it's apparent that I'm actually still sitting in front of the space heater and wishing that GT-R Was idle and gassed up lmao..
I always look at angle of the picture instead of the picture or the extra in the background who completely failed his debut..
Gives me fuel and fodder.
Anonymous
29th Dec 2017 12:23pm
As a Brit, I loved the Shaun of the Dead reference! 😊
