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Good bye
Have I given you reason to ignore
Or think that I act or play like a whore?
We were together for a time
Made love, talked, you taught me lessons in my prime.
Now, I know your job keeps you oh, so busy
But ignoring me, keeps me constantly dizzy.
I won't bother you again
Because I have more value of what you placed on me then.
Good bye
Or think that I act or play like a whore?
We were together for a time
Made love, talked, you taught me lessons in my prime.
Now, I know your job keeps you oh, so busy
But ignoring me, keeps me constantly dizzy.
I won't bother you again
Because I have more value of what you placed on me then.
Good bye
Published 28th Dec 2017
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28th Dec 2017 4:12am
28th Dec 2017 3:57pm
Hello. This poem was written by me years ago. At the time, I was feeling ignored by someone who really had no time for me. It's short but sweet. Thank you for stopping by to read. Quinn
30th Dec 2017 8:20pm
28th Dec 2017 5:41pm
28th Dec 2017 5:47pm
Awesome! Sometimes our words reflect on what we're going through now even though that's how we were feeling years and years ago. Glad you liked it. Quinn
5th Jan 2018 2:14am
So in the above, did you say goodbye and move on? Or, did you say goodbye and still run to him at his beckoning?
5th Jan 2018 3:21am
