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O! Christmas Eve! acrostic
O! Holy Night . . .
Christmas came, so they say
hidden in a lowly manger
resting in peace, from its flight
into arms of the angel
Signs were seen, among the stars
through stilled midnight air
moonlit dimmed, by Northern shards
as far as Love could care
Showing escape, aged and youth
each heart delivered from grief
“ Verily, verily, I gift you Truth
every soul who chose belief! "
~
Christmas came, so they say
hidden in a lowly manger
resting in peace, from its flight
into arms of the angel
Signs were seen, among the stars
through stilled midnight air
moonlit dimmed, by Northern shards
as far as Love could care
Showing escape, aged and youth
each heart delivered from grief
“ Verily, verily, I gift you Truth
every soul who chose belief! "
~
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Re. O! Christmas Eve! acrostic
24th Dec 2017 11:56pm
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24th Dec 2017 11:57pm
Re. O! Christmas Eve! acrostic
Anonymous
25th Dec 2017 00:36am
This ain't no little diddy! You made Christmas magic! Lotsa S and Z consonance action going on in the middle stanza. The final stanza is brilliant.
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Re: Re. O! Christmas Eve! acrostic
25th Dec 2017 00:42am
Tis a widdle diddy!
[tipsynonsensebunny]
You're becoming very astute at isolating forms of repetitions and accentuations!
[excitedtipsybunnyblushblush]
[tipsynonsensebunny]
You're becoming very astute at isolating forms of repetitions and accentuations!
[excitedtipsybunnyblushblush]
Re: Re. O! Christmas Eve! acrostic
Anonymous
25th Dec 2017 00:57am
I'm learning from the best. 💜
Can I make a minor suggestion to adjust the flow?
from
into the arms of an angel
to
into arms of the angel
[oholynonsensebunny]
Can I make a minor suggestion to adjust the flow?
from
into the arms of an angel
to
into arms of the angel
[oholynonsensebunny]
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25th Dec 2017 2:37am
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- Edited 4th Mar 2024 6:45am
25th Dec 2017 6:32am
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Re: Re. O! Christmas Eve! acrostic
25th Dec 2017 6:39am
OMG! Look who's back! So happy to see you; just didn't recognize the name! Thank you and Merry Christmas! 🎄❤
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26th Dec 2017 2:09pm
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jan 2023 2:45pm
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Re: Re. O! Christmas Eve! acrostic
30th Dec 2017 2:28pm
Thank you, Harleea! May 2018 enrich your life in love and friendships! May it bless your talents with inspirational abundance. 📝 ❤