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Indifference
life makes inconsistent burnt offerings
choices incessantly seem biased,
decisions always appear lopsided...
amidst burlesque faces.
acoustic accountability
not so obviously penned,
my language becomes my sin
then the silence that’s golden
gets thrown in...
narcotic winds,
in a numinous flicker
of pleasure indifference.
he characterize the heritage
of my abiding resistance,
then soft sighs of comfort
caught me,
embedded passages
within segments of affection
castrated...
left stagnated,
until he evokes them...
seducing me to reflect on them,
but when I journey through
crossroads titled friendship
and all it contributes to is
revitalized wooing,
his identity converts into the chasm
that lust,
respect,
admiration,
and love...
...ruptures within me.
Rain~
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Re. Indifference
23rd Dec 2017 11:30pm
This took me by storm. This felt like waiting by the clock counting the seconds for what once was and could be again. I felt the deep rumbling force of your verse and rediscovered your magic shine which makes me too glow. ;-)
John
John
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Im so pleased you harnessed patience waiting by the clock, John! 😊 Thankya for the lyrical love and for kidnappin' her!😘
Happy Holidays!
Happy Holidays!
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Anonymous
24th Dec 2017 00:22am
Lady Rain.. simply blown away.. i've missed reading your words.. this is brilliantly done, and beautifully penned.. you always deliver.. this belongs in my list.. much love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
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Dave, so great feeling your presence on my page. Missed you! Thanks for keeping her! 😊
#Sonnet smile
Happy Holidays!
#Sonnet smile
Happy Holidays!
Re. Indifference
24th Dec 2017 00:29am
A really interesting and strong send. It wormed into my imagination and made my mind bend. Exactly what to expect when you cut someone's balls off. This is an explosion of the highest order. Not simply sexually but most certainly metaphorically. Great read RainC
Happy holidays....David
Happy holidays....David
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24th Dec 2017 1:01am
So happy I could contort you cognitively, David! 😁 It's a pleasure to inhale you on my page.😊
Happy Holidays!
Happy Holidays!
Re. Indifference
24th Dec 2017 2:19am
Merry Christmas Tara! Even a repost from you is worth a celebration!!! It wouldn't surprise me if all your friends spent their days and nights wooing you. You know my heart is among them...!
JJ runs to stand under the mistletoe... hehehe
JJ
JJ runs to stand under the mistletoe... hehehe
JJ
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25th Dec 2017 1:54am
😊 Merry Christmas suga! I know you've been wanting new ink but I'm just not in the mood. Thanks for holding on to her! Haiku hug! 💋💋<< mistletoe..
Re. Indifference
24th Dec 2017 2:23am
Don't remember this one, but hey that's OK becuz I can look at it as brand spanking new, n what an amazing ink it was!! So good to have u back my dear...
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Hey hon, I'm not back...just making an appearance!😁 Thanks for showing me a little ink love. Merry Christmas!
Re. Indifference
24th Dec 2017 3:27am
Mmmmmm......light breaks through "the red door" Been a long time since I've had an opportunity to peruse the magic of your ink. The greatness nor beauty of your words does not change. : ) Merry Christmas to you and yours
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Hey now Archie! 😊 Glad you decided to peruse my poetic walls sir. Great hearing from you! Thanks for keeping her! Merry Christmas to you and yours as well!
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oh this is just the best festive season gift ever... reading you is always like ripping away ribbons & paper & finding that what lays beneath the pretty surface trimmings is so much more than you could have anticipated.
your poetry is #onfleek
bowing to your pen
xoxox
your poetry is #onfleek
bowing to your pen
xoxox
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Ive always adored your commentary! 😘Thank you, beautiful! Hope you and the little ones are well.❤
Happy Holidays!
Happy Holidays!
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It's a repost worth rereading. ❤
within segments of affection
castrated...
left stagnated,
Ouch. Talk about being cut off. I think everyone has experienced it at some point, that painful 180 turn into a brick wall of change, and you being the last to find out.
Good to see you back.
within segments of affection
castrated...
left stagnated,
Ouch. Talk about being cut off. I think everyone has experienced it at some point, that painful 180 turn into a brick wall of change, and you being the last to find out.
Good to see you back.
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25th Dec 2017 3:46am
You always 'get me', Ahavati!😊 A pleasure to feel your limerick vibe again. So stoked you decided to take her home with you. Thank you and Happy Holidays!😗
Re. Indifference
25th Dec 2017 7:51am
Your pen took me on a cerebral adventure. The delicacy of the words forced a second reading before I could reconcile the title with the ending.
Nicely crafted!
Nicely crafted!
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25th Dec 2017 3:28pm
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Re. Indifference
26th Dec 2017 10:29pm
had to be one during my absence, but when time passes it gives you new perceptive and I might not have felt it then as I do now....
your combinations of words are so unique, you place them together in ways I'd never think of ..
sounds like a lot of push and pull in this situation and with someone who knows that exact moments to use both
enjoyed this
your combinations of words are so unique, you place them together in ways I'd never think of ..
sounds like a lot of push and pull in this situation and with someone who knows that exact moments to use both
enjoyed this
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31st Dec 2017 1:13am
Hey there Free, thank you so much for the lyrical love on this ink. It's so nice to hear from you., been a long time. 😊
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31st Dec 2017 8:35pm
indeed it has, but I'll always return with your writing like a moth to a flame...
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Re. Indifference
27th Dec 2017 6:20am
missed your mocha morsels, your art invokes everything but indifference...
#goddess
#goddess
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31st Dec 2017 1:15am
My mocha butt has missed You! :)
Thank you hon, appreciate you keeping her Dean!😘
Thank you hon, appreciate you keeping her Dean!😘
Re. Indifference
28th Dec 2017 1:29am
well...on my.....darkness circling above love...wonderful ink
much love
Jeff
much love
Jeff
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31st Dec 2017 1:20am
Thank you so much Jeff! Pleased you passed through my poetic neighborhood! 😊
Re. Indifference
28th Dec 2017 1:12pm
it's so so good to see you posting again Rain
and as always...your words pull at the multifaceted
human
you are a gift like none other...
and as always...your words pull at the multifaceted
human
you are a gift like none other...
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31st Dec 2017 1:23am
You always say the right thing, naajir! It's delightful to be exposed to you! Thank you for kidnapping her for a while!😘
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29th Dec 2017 9:49pm
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31st Dec 2017 1:26am
What a wonderful comment, Quill! 😊 Thank you for passing through and leaving your footprints behind. Xo