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feeling
I promise the dawn
but it could turn from you
her long hairs
leaving you now
your daydreams
colliding with the sand
the sea shells singing
your spirit at hand
so lonely now in the lazy sun
its cheering for me
to come back now
in the blue light
turning bright
yet feeling so tired at night
but it could turn from you
her long hairs
leaving you now
your daydreams
colliding with the sand
the sea shells singing
your spirit at hand
so lonely now in the lazy sun
its cheering for me
to come back now
in the blue light
turning bright
yet feeling so tired at night
Published 23rd Dec 2017
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23rd Dec 2017 8:30am
I can relate the feeling that it happened after a long day struggling. Glad to read the ending lines with a possitive thought.
A nice write my dear!
much love RoseJasmine
A nice write my dear!
much love RoseJasmine
23rd Dec 2017 3:38pm
Thank you so much, I feel this was just something I wrote last night feeling hopeful to feel better. Today is a new day, I rested my mind
