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When I Turned You On........
Do you remember
….when I turned you on?
every single erogenous zone
stiffening, hard as a bone
touched by the hands
of a man who knew
instinctively what was going on.....
....delivering a gentle "sexual healing" to your body from dusk till dawn
your nipples, clit,
even your butthole- tight and brown
synchronized,
each pulse
beating together
in strict rhythm
straight from the heart
warm rains pouring down
tingling.....
….from the tips of your toes
up those long sexy legs
along the insides
of those thick thighs
all around that round, brown
buttered butt,
up your spine
until your mind was numb
your faced was flushed
and your breast longing to be touched
my fingers to pinch, pull and squeeze......
….your lips begging, “kiss me please”
the creamy waters gathered at the delta of her Nile
flowed and mingled with Euphrates mighty river
cumming together right there
between her thighs..... both of us so high
butterfly wings flutter, ready to fly
remembering the greatest arousal starting
when your heart touches my heart,
soul to soul
love taking control
the spirits become one
tossing and turning all around
rising high up to the sun....burnin' up
melting into one
flesh
Do you remember......
….when I turned you on?
Published 19th Dec 2017
| Edited 20th Dec 2017
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19th Dec 2017 3:52pm
19th Dec 2017 4:48pm
....wasn't feeling the word "asshole" in the moment (though the creamy, "bitter taste" was implied) 😈 perhaps I should edit that and see if it "turns you on" 😉
19th Dec 2017 8:16pm
Poem describes well effects of arousal, what being turned on is for a woman. Favourite lines:
remembering the greatest arousal starts
when your heart touches my heart,
soul to soul
love taking control
the spirits become one
remembering the greatest arousal starts
when your heart touches my heart,
soul to soul
love taking control
the spirits become one
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Jun 2019 1:47pm
20th Dec 2017 3:18am
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20th Dec 2017 3:26am
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Jun 2019 1:47pm
20th Dec 2017 3:28am
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20th Dec 2017 12:19pm
.....edited again to improve the rhythm and flow, check out the newest version
