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A Moment not of Mind
Encircled by shadows
Drowning
in ashes of a past
left gasping
Grasping
hope
Per chance to resurrect dreams
A moment
To envision
the incision
which unbinds the heart
from ego and mind
Liberates desires
inspires
Divine love
Meant only for the soul
Drowning
in ashes of a past
left gasping
Grasping
hope
Per chance to resurrect dreams
A moment
To envision
the incision
which unbinds the heart
from ego and mind
Liberates desires
inspires
Divine love
Meant only for the soul
Published 18th Dec 2017
| Edited 15th Jan 2018
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18th Dec 2017 12:51pm
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18th Dec 2017 12:57pm
18th Dec 2017 1:05pm
Mel...Mel...Mel!! U know I loved this!!
It had flow, rhythm, rhyme, n content!!
It had flow, rhythm, rhyme, n content!!
18th Dec 2017 1:43pm
18th Dec 2017 1:50pm
The opening line hooks
"Encircled by shadows "
then you drag us off into the night
"Drowning
in ashes of a past" the struggle bleeds through this write
"Liberates desires
Inspires
Devine love
Meant only for the soul "
great heartfelt writing
splendid Love poem mel44
"Encircled by shadows "
then you drag us off into the night
"Drowning
in ashes of a past" the struggle bleeds through this write
"Liberates desires
Inspires
Devine love
Meant only for the soul "
great heartfelt writing
splendid Love poem mel44
18th Dec 2017 2:08pm
I am so pleased you enjoyed. I believe we must always take advantage of those moments that free our souls! Thank you for the read and feedback😊
19th Dec 2017 5:09am
beautiful Mel
deeply haunting right from the start..
"Encircled by shadows
Drowning
in ashes of a past
Left gasping"
stirring write..
beautiful even in its pain..
love Crim
deeply haunting right from the start..
"Encircled by shadows
Drowning
in ashes of a past
Left gasping"
stirring write..
beautiful even in its pain..
love Crim
19th Dec 2017 7:39am
Thank you lovely Crim. Always holding on with Hope... Heart Open Please Enter.
Thanks for your support as always😘Xxx
Thanks for your support as always😘Xxx
19th Dec 2017 1:23pm
Arrrrgh!
D[i]vine
Lovely poem. Hold the vibration, Mel. The Universe is calculating and coordinating. 💜
So good to see you back. 📝
D[i]vine
Lovely poem. Hold the vibration, Mel. The Universe is calculating and coordinating. 💜
So good to see you back. 📝
19th Dec 2017 4:31pm
Anonymous
4th Jan 2023 6:11pm
Oh yes!!! Very inspirational
I really enjoyed this vibe from the layout
to the execution
I really enjoyed this vibe from the layout
to the execution
Anonymous
4th Jan 2023 6:11pm
Oh yes!!! Very inspirational
I really enjoyed this vibe from the layout
to the execution
I really enjoyed this vibe from the layout
to the execution
5th Jan 2023 9:41am
Dear Naajir,
Thank you very much for the read and for taking the time to comment. Bless
Mel
Thank you very much for the read and for taking the time to comment. Bless
Mel
