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Rock, paper, scissors
Feed my slip stream
with your kinetic energy
lick the diamond
with your laser slash tongue
Dont stop moving
till your propulsions done
fill me in
on the scenes ive missed
Whilst i orbit 'round
your favorite lie;
shooting star kiss
I vote you witness
its rock, paper, scissors
if she loves,
if she loves me not
I picked the sunflowers petals
and the answer made me stop
does she love me
she loves me not
I'm staring at the last petal
'cause she loves me not
Does that mean anything
will it reset the coarse of love
superstition has gone to my head
shoot me down in a spray of lead
with your kinetic energy
lick the diamond
with your laser slash tongue
Dont stop moving
till your propulsions done
fill me in
on the scenes ive missed
Whilst i orbit 'round
your favorite lie;
shooting star kiss
I vote you witness
its rock, paper, scissors
if she loves,
if she loves me not
I picked the sunflowers petals
and the answer made me stop
does she love me
she loves me not
I'm staring at the last petal
'cause she loves me not
Does that mean anything
will it reset the coarse of love
superstition has gone to my head
shoot me down in a spray of lead
Published 16th Dec 2017
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16th Dec 2017 5:23pm
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Anonymous
16th Dec 2017 5:33pm
Feed my slip stream
with your kinetic energy
lick the diamond
with your laser slash tongue
Dont stop moving
till your propulsions done
fill me in
on the scenes ive missed
This was very enjoyable. You describe this woman as though she where an Album.
Beth
with your kinetic energy
lick the diamond
with your laser slash tongue
Dont stop moving
till your propulsions done
fill me in
on the scenes ive missed
This was very enjoyable. You describe this woman as though she where an Album.
Beth
16th Dec 2017 6:53pm
This is really good! :) Well done!
"Does that mean anything
will it reset the coarse of love "
This is 👌 But, since you asked for critique, "coarse" should be "course"
"superstition has gone to my head
shoot me down in a spray of lead "
Killer last lines!
"Does that mean anything
will it reset the coarse of love "
This is 👌 But, since you asked for critique, "coarse" should be "course"
"superstition has gone to my head
shoot me down in a spray of lead "
Killer last lines!
