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Silver bus
Standing in the shadows
black haired girl
looking for him again
it's another year
it's another fear
the silver bus won't ever come
her misery is done
black haired girl
looking for him again
it's another year
it's another fear
the silver bus won't ever come
her misery is done
Published 15th Dec 2017
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15th Dec 2017 6:13pm
Darkest Countess
this was a painful read
with an ending I could understand..
being let down
year after year
the black hair girl
finally says enough
& quits hurting from
a situation she can't change..
painful but power..
love Crim
this was a painful read
with an ending I could understand..
being let down
year after year
the black hair girl
finally says enough
& quits hurting from
a situation she can't change..
painful but power..
love Crim
15th Dec 2017 6:53pm
As Lady Crim above, the seemingly unending wait can take it's toll and one may resign oneself to a tortured existence.
I wish to offer this to consider, for it will serve you well
If one spends their time extending their pier, the ship awaited has less distance to travel and is more likely to
find it's destination.
A heart felt write, you have penned here.
I wish to offer this to consider, for it will serve you well
If one spends their time extending their pier, the ship awaited has less distance to travel and is more likely to
find it's destination.
A heart felt write, you have penned here.
