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How we Danced
I remember last summer
Holding hands, holding thoughts
Whispering secrets
Falling deeply in love
I remember that night
How we danced
How you spun me around
High into the atmosphere
I remember that weekend
Lips on lips
And for the first time
Your tongue met mine
How I wonder now
How I worry about
This love we share
If it's truly there
Did that I kiss I gave
Leave a stain on your heart?
Or is it made of sand?
My tracks eroding with the wind...
If this love will pass
Give me one more chance
To hold you once more
And remember how we danced
Holding hands, holding thoughts
Whispering secrets
Falling deeply in love
I remember that night
How we danced
How you spun me around
High into the atmosphere
I remember that weekend
Lips on lips
And for the first time
Your tongue met mine
How I wonder now
How I worry about
This love we share
If it's truly there
Did that I kiss I gave
Leave a stain on your heart?
Or is it made of sand?
My tracks eroding with the wind...
If this love will pass
Give me one more chance
To hold you once more
And remember how we danced
Published 12th Dec 2017
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12th Dec 2017 10:51pm
breathtakingly beautiful
lovely fairy my heart danced
with you at these lines..
"Did that I kiss I gave
Leave a stain on your heart?
Or is it made of sand?
My tracks eroding with the wind... "
dearest poetess
I don't see how your kiss
couldn't have stained his heart
because your poetry has ours..
love Crim
lovely fairy my heart danced
with you at these lines..
"Did that I kiss I gave
Leave a stain on your heart?
Or is it made of sand?
My tracks eroding with the wind... "
dearest poetess
I don't see how your kiss
couldn't have stained his heart
because your poetry has ours..
love Crim
13th Dec 2017 3:19am
Lovely Crim, this comment made my night! Those lines are what drove me to write this.. I am grateful to be a part of the poetry family :)
13th Dec 2017 5:28pm
Did that I kiss I gave
Leave a stain on your heart?
Or is it made of sand?
My tracks eroding with the wind... "
If this love will pass
Give me one more chance
To hold you once more
And remember how we danced
Your words, the sentiment in this piece went straight through my heart. If I were the subject of your affection, I would offer this word word ... Unforgettable
~Wicked
26th Dec 2017 5:56am
Wicked, your comment has touched me.. I'm delighted by your kind word, thank you as always for stopping by
