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The First Cut..............................
.....a bed
Large, soft
covered with large plush towels
strewn about
through my door, you enter
The Master's chambers
completely
unequivocally
naked
Am I absolutely enjoying the view?
I say yes..........
As I await
You fall back into the softness
of the spread before us
Your eyes are locked upon my presence
This certain space, I navigate
You follow my every move
Your body trembles
As the music from the sound system
Lays down a very sensual, erotic groove
"No Ordinary Love......"
Don't you trust me babygirl?
The razor.........
…....straight and sharp enough to
split the finest hair
Pound for pound
Upon your plush and ample mound
You lay before me not making a single
solitary
sound......
The warmth of
Soothing body gels
They cast upon your nude frame
a hauntingly familiar spell
I moisten my large firm hands
With warm water
Beads drip down upon
Intimate places.........
I feel your fears and apprehensions
Deep within my chest
As your breast rise and fall, I shall
do my absolute best
to cause no pains that you should not feel
as the gel turns to plush, fragrant foam
Tis time for my skilled hands to deftly roam
.......your body, oh so divine.
I cover your mound, your lips, your thighs
As if the end were near,
you slowly close your eyes............
….........my steely blade gleams in soft candle light
My hands grasp it's handle very, very tight
Yes, the first cut is always the deepest.....
....and then,
I hear you gasp as the first stroke begins
downward into your soft, pubescent mound
of baby fine hair, I pull the blade
down, down, down
My hands gently shaking
Your eyes, oh how they flutter
Each stroke getting smoother and smoother
until your flesh, smooth like creamy butter
I shave you clean from the top of your curvaceous waist
I guide the sharp edge across your pubic bone
around your lips to the inside of your thighs
I shall erase........
…......every trace hair that time has placed
upon the most special, most intimate part
For now, the pleasure must truly start........
In payment, you allow my mouth to kiss
This bare, soft tender masterpiece just like this......
…....my hands now massage your core with
warm scented oils
I massage your ample pussy lips as
your passion begins to boil
My fingertips explore more closely
what lay nestled between your folds
Your clitty-cat throbs in carnal heat
my strong tongue ensues; I feel your pulse racing
I feel your heart beat
My fingers slip deeply there inside
copious wetness, your pleasure, you can't hide...
….from me, my precious baby
Your hips begin to undulate as your body begins to loose all control
My fingers held tightly within your grasp
as the fire and lust consume your very soul
Sturm and Drang
Tension and Sweet Release
...you cum to me, so naturally
your flesh soft and smooth to the touch of my hands
as satisfied as any woman can ever be
….....until the next time we dance
…...and you dare to shave me.
for some background music, listen: (copy/paste) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WfdJBYoKz0k&feature=results_video&playnext=1&list=PL0BFE1D858510E40A
Published 22nd Sep 2011
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22nd Sep 2011 5:43am
Wow MrM,
so sensual, sexual and pulse racing-ly amazing. I'm loving the way you write.
Harper
so sensual, sexual and pulse racing-ly amazing. I'm loving the way you write.
Harper
22nd Sep 2011 6:55am
If you ever do a workshop on composition, I want in. A sculptor of words at the finest level is what you are! I admire your ability to give new color to what most people reduce to over-used slang words. A classic here.
22nd Sep 2011 7:42am
This one is sensual, hot and sweet all at the same time. Very sexy read!
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2011 2:24am
wow - this is the best alternative to an AMAZON wax...so named ONLY AN AMAZON can stand them
or is it a BRAZILIAN WAX ,,,,,long way to go
this is wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!1
or is it a BRAZILIAN WAX ,,,,,long way to go
this is wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!1
23rd Sep 2011 2:20pm
Mmmmm... luxurious, sensual and erotic definitely something any woman would enjoy and would look forward to... beautiful Brother M
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
Anonymous
24th Sep 2011 3:12pm
SEXY!
27th Apr 2012 4:45pm
The ultimate trust to allow another to shave one so intimately.so erotic and it feels so good, a smooth glide and a silken caress, no restriction....A Captivating beauty.
25th Mar 2013 5:27am
I have to tell because I do so enjoy the dark sometime.. thsi put lovely thoughts in my mind.. of small cuts... and soft suckings.. now back tho this piece.. what a picture to begin with.. then your words carried us on this wave of smooth slow unhurried strokes that had the heart pounding with easy smooth line seeing this beautiful picture being painted with your words .. this was another pleasure to read thank you for sharing,
22nd Sep 2016 5:55pm
In search of self poems between your older work, I ended up with The First Cut...
Yes, it's always the deepest... metaphorically speaking...
Such a detailed, sensual and seductive write, definitely something every women would enjoy!
The devotion... the trust... the excitement...
Tthis one is truly a masterpiece!!!
Yes, it's always the deepest... metaphorically speaking...
Such a detailed, sensual and seductive write, definitely something every women would enjoy!
The devotion... the trust... the excitement...
Tthis one is truly a masterpiece!!!
