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The "milk" I never drank
I was a child of six or seven
Walking home
end of school
Innocent young creature skipping along
Alone I went through the neighborhood
Polluted streets
Winter grey sky
Many buildings I passed
Then I hear a man calling:
"Little girl look over here"
I faced the direction in which the voice came
He was...
"Peeing"
Quickly looked away , in a fright
thought in mind of curious thought
Why did he tell me to look during his private business?
Again his voice rings through,
"Hey girl look! I'm peeing milk!"
Milk..?
Turned my head and looked again
I was surprised at truth of sight!
The liquid was white!
He peed milk!
"Whoah dear sir you pee milk!
how do you pee a liquid of white?"
He exclaims-
"I just do... c'mere drink my milk"
From further away, he had his willly out
for sure he seemed to pee milk...
I was tempted for a sip
Despite the amusement I walked away
for milk from a man's ding-dong
seemed unappealing
Past a couple blocks there was that man again:
"Hey girl look! I'm peeing milk! Come drink it sweetie
aren't you thirsty?"
I looked again
he peed milk
Again??
Truly surprised was I, the wonders of life
still a bit queasy
witnessing a milking man
I thought only females milk...from their breasts..
I picked up my pace, for I felt uneasy
didn't look back
at his magical male milking organ
It has imprinted in my memory
now I know
Just what kind of "milk" he produced
and why he wanted his milk to be drunk so bad
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The story about from my other piece ringed this memory and decided to share it. It made me realize just how many sick bastards are out there....
But I found it humorous at how I thought it was so amazing in my innocent mind...
Walking home
end of school
Innocent young creature skipping along
Alone I went through the neighborhood
Polluted streets
Winter grey sky
Many buildings I passed
Then I hear a man calling:
"Little girl look over here"
I faced the direction in which the voice came
He was...
"Peeing"
Quickly looked away , in a fright
thought in mind of curious thought
Why did he tell me to look during his private business?
Again his voice rings through,
"Hey girl look! I'm peeing milk!"
Milk..?
Turned my head and looked again
I was surprised at truth of sight!
The liquid was white!
He peed milk!
"Whoah dear sir you pee milk!
how do you pee a liquid of white?"
He exclaims-
"I just do... c'mere drink my milk"
From further away, he had his willly out
for sure he seemed to pee milk...
I was tempted for a sip
Despite the amusement I walked away
for milk from a man's ding-dong
seemed unappealing
Past a couple blocks there was that man again:
"Hey girl look! I'm peeing milk! Come drink it sweetie
aren't you thirsty?"
I looked again
he peed milk
Again??
Truly surprised was I, the wonders of life
still a bit queasy
witnessing a milking man
I thought only females milk...from their breasts..
I picked up my pace, for I felt uneasy
didn't look back
at his magical male milking organ
It has imprinted in my memory
now I know
Just what kind of "milk" he produced
and why he wanted his milk to be drunk so bad
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The story about from my other piece ringed this memory and decided to share it. It made me realize just how many sick bastards are out there....
But I found it humorous at how I thought it was so amazing in my innocent mind...
Published 8th Dec 2017
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Anonymous
8th Dec 2017 11:40pm
Totally nailed the depravity & evil ways of some who, sadly, walk amongst us.
8th Dec 2017 11:46pm
Oh, thank you!
It wasn't meant for a dark piece...
but it might've turned out that way...
But thank you once again for your praise!
Appreciate your visit..
:)
H
It wasn't meant for a dark piece...
but it might've turned out that way...
But thank you once again for your praise!
Appreciate your visit..
:)
H
9th Dec 2017 00:43am
Dang my friend I loved it very well done. Can definitely be taken in a dark way like the previous commenter stated.
9th Dec 2017 1:29am
I guess so lol
thank you dear friend for your kind words upon my work! :)
Great appreciation in your time spent on my works dear friend!
Love
H
thank you dear friend for your kind words upon my work! :)
Great appreciation in your time spent on my works dear friend!
Love
H
9th Dec 2017 00:54am
That sick fucker...wantin his jollies from a child not even a teen!? Jesus...I've no words...
9th Dec 2017 1:31am
I know a word...
Milk!
lol yep. I'm glad I didn't drink it.
Although one day I might from a lover...
I'm just thankful I haven't been raped!
Thank you for visiting dear R :)
Love
H
Milk!
lol yep. I'm glad I didn't drink it.
Although one day I might from a lover...
I'm just thankful I haven't been raped!
Thank you for visiting dear R :)
Love
H
9th Dec 2017 2:56am
9th Dec 2017 3:50am
Anonymous
10th Dec 2017 7:12am
Heavy... well written
10th Dec 2017 7:39am
11th Dec 2017 6:50am
my friend...my heart is on the floor...sickness in the word must be cured...this man decided to listen to demons to pervert youthful energy...I am the enemy to such...and will stomp some equalization into this waste of a person anytime you desire...
your friend
Jeff
your friend
Jeff
Why...
thank you so much for your compassionate heart to my experiences in my work!
That 'ol man was surly perverted... yet I am still here unbothered since then, of his intent since I didn't drink it! lol
I greatly appreciate it dear Jeff :)
your heart holds justice.
<3
H
thank you so much for your compassionate heart to my experiences in my work!
That 'ol man was surly perverted... yet I am still here unbothered since then, of his intent since I didn't drink it! lol
I greatly appreciate it dear Jeff :)
your heart holds justice.
<3
H
14th Dec 2017 7:55pm
Crazy vivid write. the imagination mixed with a pervert in the real world is a wild experience for a kid from our memories.
luckily i never had a run in like this as a kid and it sucks you had to.
needless to say a very interesting write about just how strange the people in the world can be.
thanks for sharing this crazy memory with us and taking us on a wild ride SourMelon0313
luckily i never had a run in like this as a kid and it sucks you had to.
needless to say a very interesting write about just how strange the people in the world can be.
thanks for sharing this crazy memory with us and taking us on a wild ride SourMelon0313
14th Dec 2017 8:03pm
It is my pleasure to bring pieces of me in my works for such valued heart as yours reads it! :)
Yes.... some perverse minded peeps live in this world...
Great appreciations <3
H
Yes.... some perverse minded peeps live in this world...
Great appreciations <3
H
