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First snow 2017
The rains change over
Temperature dropping
Canadian air skipping
over mountain peaks
White streaming
Caught in soft
Dancing, swirling poetry
From the sky,
Accumulating
Temperature dropping
Canadian air skipping
over mountain peaks
White streaming
Caught in soft
Dancing, swirling poetry
From the sky,
Accumulating
Published 8th Dec 2017
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8th Dec 2017 4:50pm
Omg it took me there man, and it was such a beautiful sight to behold. I liked the minimalism! It leaves a lot to the imagination.
8th Dec 2017 4:55pm
"Dancing, swirling poetry
From the sky"
That's a wonderful metaphor for snow!
Makes me wonder if you live in upstate, NY where we get those Alberta Clippers dropping a foot of fluffy flakes from time to time. I love walking in a snow storm, especially at night under the ambient light, listening to millions of tiny crystals ringing out their song as they clink together in piles atop the ground and then crunching under my feet.
Your poem has tickled my mind...
JJ
From the sky"
That's a wonderful metaphor for snow!
Makes me wonder if you live in upstate, NY where we get those Alberta Clippers dropping a foot of fluffy flakes from time to time. I love walking in a snow storm, especially at night under the ambient light, listening to millions of tiny crystals ringing out their song as they clink together in piles atop the ground and then crunching under my feet.
Your poem has tickled my mind...
JJ
Anonymous
8th Dec 2017 10:23pm
So calmingly beautiful JeM... had read this
out loud and it was soothing.
💘
out loud and it was soothing.
💘
Anonymous
14th Dec 2017 2:38pm
So serene and beautiful. I feel as though I'm sitting at a window watching it fall.
