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Absence of Sleep

The world is melting.
My eyes are wide.
No sense of slumber.
My eyes won't hide.
 
A bend of numerous days,
all of which have washed away.
Have lead me to this sleepless place,
where insomnia reigns over every face.
 
Sleep is not a visitor of mine.
The darkness won't embrace me.
My eyelids refuse to surrender to time,
yet long to be set free.
 
I'm being held captive by my very own head,
and long for the liberating consumption of black.
Taunted am I vigorously with thoughts of bed,
and the simple normalities I lack.
 
After eons awoken this feeling does peak.
My eyes feel heavy.
My knees feel weak.
Alas, my world grows darker,
and heavy the eyes do crack.
A sense of sweet pure somnolence,
compelled by beautiful black.
 
Here the climax comes,
and it shines so ever bright.
I've waited for ages to say this:
"I bid you all goodnight"
Written by DeadiAm
Published | Edited 26th Nov 2018
Author's Note
This is one of my very early poems. I wrote this back in 2009 when I was beginning to discover my love for poetry. A simple piece as it was written. I'll revise eventually I'm sure. Anyways, would love to hear your thoughts. :D
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