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7th Dec 2017 9:56pm
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Anonymous
7th Dec 2017 10:18pm
An ideal existence for sure.
As pressure increases to meet expectations, this one has hit me at just the right time - love it <3
As pressure increases to meet expectations, this one has hit me at just the right time - love it <3
7th Dec 2017 11:13pm
8th Dec 2017 00:25am
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11th Dec 2017 6:26am
12th Dec 2017 3:52am
12th Dec 2017 5:01am
This is literally the topic I have been pondering about all my life...
Idea of life and living...
Yes, perhaps it's just for us to exist..
But I find all the things we think so greatly of, what seems significant to us now, when we die... even the brilliant of minds dying out... such as yours, is such a pity... years and years of experience and wisdom and knowledge disappearing with inescapable thing called mortality..
Just like the Ancient pyramid and Egypt days..
(Sorry if this felt kinda long and unnecessarily philosophical, I have had thoughts I hadn't able to let out and your piece simply lit a flame)
It may just be my young mind pondering, but what a great idea dear artist
Love
H
Idea of life and living...
Yes, perhaps it's just for us to exist..
But I find all the things we think so greatly of, what seems significant to us now, when we die... even the brilliant of minds dying out... such as yours, is such a pity... years and years of experience and wisdom and knowledge disappearing with inescapable thing called mortality..
Just like the Ancient pyramid and Egypt days..
(Sorry if this felt kinda long and unnecessarily philosophical, I have had thoughts I hadn't able to let out and your piece simply lit a flame)
It may just be my young mind pondering, but what a great idea dear artist
Love
H
12th Dec 2017 5:29am
Thank you for the kind words!
I understand your point about morality but I tend to view it more romantically lol. Not being religious, i find it an oddly beautiful tragedy that we are bound by a reality that more and more doesn't even feel real. Luckily ideas transcend morality so even when we die, we have the opportunity to live on. This is why poetry is awesome! I believe our voices can change the world, if only we can find the right words :P
I understand your point about morality but I tend to view it more romantically lol. Not being religious, i find it an oddly beautiful tragedy that we are bound by a reality that more and more doesn't even feel real. Luckily ideas transcend morality so even when we die, we have the opportunity to live on. This is why poetry is awesome! I believe our voices can change the world, if only we can find the right words :P
12th Dec 2017 5:40am
Very true dear poet... I understand and respect greatly of your romantic views.. Ideas may transcend mortality, but not much can be spread when one so influential dies.. then the influence of the influential individual disappears, and not many comes to appreciate such wonderful things of us as humans..
I guess it can be beautiful.. thank you for sharing!
I guess it can be beautiful.. thank you for sharing!
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