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A Dominant Touch
in manacled silence
you found me
troubled my still waters
& marked me
with your melody
exotic notes
foreign to my soul
given a first taste of freedom
in restraints
i sipped disciplined essence
when you entered
my inner sanctum
& witnessed
a shaken girl
abandoned
left to run wild
in your presence
my trembling ceased
a known authority
who speaks to my demons
& with a Master's eye
recognizes each one
with an experienced hand
you break them all
as whip kisses flesh
in tears I am baptized
& in pain born again
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 7th Dec 2017
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7th Dec 2017 2:50am
thank you beautiful Daniella for your awesome comment bringing me so much joy :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
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7th Dec 2017 2:52am
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7th Dec 2017 2:53am
Anonymous
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7th Dec 2017 2:45am
in tears I am baptized
& in pain born again
* Stands ... clapping, and shouting
Bravissimo !
Your words shot right through to the core of my soul. This ink is beyond outstanding .
You have painted a most romantic, and sensual journey of total surrender ...so beautiful
Wicked
thank you graciously i'm honored dearest Wicked One this is what I feel when I read you & other Doms/subs..
what I imagine I would gain from the experience..
love Crim
what I imagine I would gain from the experience..
love Crim
Anonymous
7th Dec 2017 3:41am
My love, such breathtaking lines in here...you know they speak directly to my soul...freedoms from all thought, just feeling the pleasure within that fine line edged along pain...in the right hands a most rewarding experience. Stunning!!!
I love you passionately
yours always & forever
xoxoxo love Taryn
I love you passionately
yours always & forever
xoxoxo love Taryn
7th Dec 2017 3:45am
thank you my love. my submissive Mistress you have revealed so much beauty about this life style & have continued to inspire me through the years with your dark chocolate erotics..
I love you passionately..
love Brenda
I love you passionately..
love Brenda
7th Dec 2017 4:21am
"& marked me
with your melody
exotic notes
foreign to my soul "
Such a gracious work as always dear lovel crim..
your work always leaves me refined
Love
H
with your melody
exotic notes
foreign to my soul "
Such a gracious work as always dear lovel crim..
your work always leaves me refined
Love
H
7th Dec 2017 4:27am
7th Dec 2017 4:41am
A great piece. I especially love the ending. Ties it all together quite well.
7th Dec 2017 4:59am
7th Dec 2017 11:20am
Oh my dear ... you captured the mystery, magic and romance of it all so beautifully. I am truly swept away ...
7th Dec 2017 1:15pm
thank you graciously beautiful Dragonfly I've been very inspired by the poets & poetesses on this site like you who allow me a taste ;)
love Crim
love Crim
7th Dec 2017 12:05pm
7th Dec 2017 1:16pm
thank you graciously dearest Poet
now you wanting to snag my lines
that is a real honor indeed :)
love you..
Brenda
now you wanting to snag my lines
that is a real honor indeed :)
love you..
Brenda
Anonymous
7th Dec 2017 2:26pm
This is territory I know very little about, though I understand that concept and find it beautiful in theory. You bring such beauty to the canvas with your words here, my beautiful Dark Angel. Intoxicating. I have to agree with Poe above...those last 2 lines are definitely your exclamation point.
I do so love you, beautiful one, so very much
...ever your Willow
I do so love you, beautiful one, so very much
...ever your Willow
7th Dec 2017 4:28pm
thank you beautiful Willow for delving into the deep end with me of course our love knows more than us both but she & other poets have opened my mind to what I feel would be a beautiful experience knowing instinctively i'm a submissive..
love you lovely one..
love Brenda
love you lovely one..
love Brenda
7th Dec 2017 6:04pm
Another awesome write, you are really on fire at the moment - loving it :-)
Huge big Hugs :-))))
Huge big Hugs :-))))
7th Dec 2017 6:08pm
7th Dec 2017 9:57pm
"when you entered
my inner sanctum
& witnessed
a shaken girl
abandoned
left to run wild"
"in tears I am baptized
& in pain born again"
my lovely friend...we do baptize ourselves each day....a cross to bear....a lonely road were we find the cleansing renewal...we initiate the wash of the soul...a deep seated correction mechanism we all are born with...and rarely know is operating
love
Jeff
my inner sanctum
& witnessed
a shaken girl
abandoned
left to run wild"
"in tears I am baptized
& in pain born again"
my lovely friend...we do baptize ourselves each day....a cross to bear....a lonely road were we find the cleansing renewal...we initiate the wash of the soul...a deep seated correction mechanism we all are born with...and rarely know is operating
love
Jeff
7th Dec 2017 10:38pm
thank you graciously dearest Jeff for your deep insight & interpretation on this write..
love Crim
love Crim
7th Dec 2017 10:51pm
Fascinating how demons are quelled when "whip kisses flesh." Extreme sensation can bring some level of peace, paradoxically. Or maybe agony can lead to ecstasy. All depends.... Wonderful work Lady Crim!
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10th Dec 2017 6:47pm
thank you dearest poet you stirred my heart greatly with such a beautiful comment.. you really made my week as poets we can't hope for anything greater than to make a person feel something when they read us..
you made me feel today with your write
having deep undertones & heart..
you're beautifully soulful..
love Crim
you made me feel today with your write
having deep undertones & heart..
you're beautifully soulful..
love Crim
