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Filth
the day aborted me
cast me out
of its pretty little cunt
a monstrous beast
not fit to walk the light
among the blessed ones
a cum stain
oozing from a whore's ass
left on her panties
& shoved in a John's mouth
when he wants one last taste
of her sweet degradation
i feel low today
rejected at every turn
& can't shake the feeling
i'm cursed
a shallow creature
not deep enough to piss in
full of self scorn
i twist with it
as it eats me a new hole
to vomit my garbage from
i'm the shit
maggots expel
when they are done
feasting off the scum
that pours
from humanites
sewered thoughts
feel my internal rage
& fucking burn in it
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Re. Filth
Anonymous
2nd Dec 2017 3:02am
Beautiful one, this made me so sad to think someone I love so could feel so worthless. You bring so much beauty to this world in so many colors and textures, light and shadows. The imagery you've painted hete is the polar opposite of what I see. I'm wrapping arms of love tight around you tonight, my friend

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Re: Re. Filth
2nd Dec 2017 3:19am
thank you my beautiful friend today & yesterday were just bad days.. as always I expressed that feeling the best I could..
I love you..
Brenda
I love you..
Brenda
Re. Filth
2nd Dec 2017 4:17am
I feel such empathy for you. I felt this poem deeply. I wish I could bring you moonshine margaritas and pizza.
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Re: Re. Filth
2nd Dec 2017 7:49pm
thank you beautiful Jade your comment warmed my heart & gifted me smiles I would love margaritas & pizza with you :)
love Crim
love Crim
Re. Filth
2nd Dec 2017 4:30am
I often feel beat down like this. I always say I feel like I've been eaten by a wolf and shit over a cliff in the ocean and eaten by a shark and, you guessed it, shit out again. But all we can do is bear it and I KNOW you can.
Love ya, Lady Crim!
Love ya, Lady Crim!
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Re: Re. Filth
2nd Dec 2017 7:51pm
thank you my Darkest Lord for understanding this darkened scribe when I wrote it I was unsure of posting it but I try to always stay true to a feeling.. I deeply appreciate you..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. Filth
2nd Dec 2017 4:31am
I'm feeling it. For days at a time, at times. But I don't hope to ever really express it so powerfully...so eloquently. Filthy ink (I mean that in the best possible way)
love,
-C-
love,
-C-
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Re: Re. Filth
2nd Dec 2017 7:52pm
thank you Obsessed One for relating you let me know i'm not alone in this feeling..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. Filth
Anonymous
2nd Dec 2017 8:23am
Brenda.. the truth isn't always beautiful.. it's the life we live, that defines us.. love you my sister..
Dave
Dave

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Re: Re. Filth
2nd Dec 2017 7:53pm
thank you Dave yes the truth of our emotions isn't always pretty.. I cherish your visits..
love you..
Brenda
love you..
Brenda
Re. Filth
Anonymous
2nd Dec 2017 9:56am
Saddens that a lady who offers so much support & kindness to fellow writers and illuminates DUP - should have to endure such pain. Life can often feel like a death. Stay Strong. x

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Re: Re. Filth
2nd Dec 2017 7:54pm
thank you dearest poet not to worry it was just a bad couple of days it's passed.. thank you for your warm thoughts..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. Filth
2nd Dec 2017 6:53pm
these emotions...how sick i can be to understand completely
.....to smile because WE are not the only
i wish i could say "hang in there" and make standardized words of constellation
but this is just not rewarding as we do know.
goddammit though!!!! I see so much of you in me -----me in you.
.....to smile because WE are not the only
i wish i could say "hang in there" and make standardized words of constellation
but this is just not rewarding as we do know.
goddammit though!!!! I see so much of you in me -----me in you.
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Re: Re. Filth
2nd Dec 2017 7:55pm
thank you dearest Christopher not sick at all in relating just human my friend.. I deeply appreciate your presence you gifted me smiles :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. Filth
2nd Dec 2017 7:22pm
I think you so graphically described this to such a degree, FILTH, sounds like a clean word...lol...for real, this was darkly brilliant!
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Re: Re. Filth
2nd Dec 2017 7:56pm
giggles yeah Poe I guess this is beyond filth lol thank you for being here..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. Filth
2nd Dec 2017 7:37pm
"Feel my internal rage and fucking burn with it." No apologies from you! You have more ferocity than any writer here that I know of. Blazing work!
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Re: Re. Filth
2nd Dec 2017 7:57pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow for feeling my pain & rage.. I deeply appreciate the love you show me regardless..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. Filth
Anonymous
3rd Dec 2017 1:34am
Ohhhhhh my love......you knew this would give me ickies...to think for a moment you could feel this way is so upsetting but I will also say this....we all have days like this...when we are at the lowest we feel we could be. We are always our worst critics and we often judge ourselves too harshly (perhaps this is because we don't judge any others and it spills over, ltm) but you know, if in front of you, finger would be flying north and south saying "no no no no no no no...." I feel the rage but I will wrap it within pixie dust and cast those flames off into the wind...
I love you passionately
yours always & forever
xoxoxox Taryn
I love you passionately
yours always & forever
xoxoxox Taryn

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Re: Re. Filth
3rd Dec 2017 2:15am
thank you my love for braving the ickies & reading about a very bad day mixed in with a bit of depression making me feel dreadful.. yes we are our own worst enemy.. I feel your loving pixie dust swirling around me making me dreamy :)
I love yo madly..
love Brenda
I love yo madly..
love Brenda
Re. Filth
3rd Dec 2017 7:31pm
I hate day like these - they happen all to often :-(
Huge hugs coming your way :-))))))))))))
Huge hugs coming your way :-))))))))))))
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Re: Re. Filth
3rd Dec 2017 11:46pm
thank you David I hate that you can relate to this kind of day my friend..
love & hugs..
Brenda
love & hugs..
Brenda
Re. Filth
4th Dec 2017 8:42am
filthy but genuinely arousing
how greasy does a hairline have to be? a powerful block of words hit like a screen print. can i get this on a t-shirt?
how greasy does a hairline have to be? a powerful block of words hit like a screen print. can i get this on a t-shirt?
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Re: Re. Filth
7th Dec 2017 3:18am
thank you dearest Anna a better compliment for this poem I can't imagine..
giggles if you like feel free put this on a t-shirt :)
love Brenda
giggles if you like feel free put this on a t-shirt :)
love Brenda