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Am I Broken
My eyes have cried more tears than you would ever know
I put on a smile so no one can see what I hide locked deep inside
I trusted
I loved
My heart was left in shambles
I yearned for someone to fall as I had fallen to
I cried
I screamed
Words unspoken
Is it me am I Broken.
I put on a smile so no one can see what I hide locked deep inside
I trusted
I loved
My heart was left in shambles
I yearned for someone to fall as I had fallen to
I cried
I screamed
Words unspoken
Is it me am I Broken.
Published 30th Nov 2017
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30th Nov 2017 8:25am
Heartbreaking words from the heartbroken. No words can comfort you until time heals your wounds. Expressed with deep truth...
JJ
JJ
30th Nov 2017 8:36am
Think we all ask that question..."Am I Broken"
especially when we open up...then left to cry
thanks for expressing your pain in words, for others to relate
especially when we open up...then left to cry
thanks for expressing your pain in words, for others to relate
25th Mar 2018 5:44am
thank you glad u enjoyed the writing it helps to release and not feel so broken :)
30th Mar 2018 6:01am
I have often used the word "broken" myself and your expression
through words deeply captures your pain.
Some re-assembling of breaks
creates a stronger whole.
I love your insight.
Sandman
through words deeply captures your pain.
Some re-assembling of breaks
creates a stronger whole.
I love your insight.
Sandman
30th Mar 2018 8:43am
