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Midnight
Midnight
midnight has come and gone again
leaving mixed emotions within
you loved me all night long
and left before the morning's dawn
we spent the long hours of the night
wrapped in lovers embrace that felt so right
the pleasure and ecstasy we explored
felt like a promise of so much more
but I awoke to find the sheets that burned so hot had now turned cold
and knew in my heart that you I would never again hold
off the bed, i begin to rise
with bittersweet tears in my eyes
I wonder if our paths will ever cross again
but I know we are better off in the end
midnight has come and gone again
leaving mixed emotions within
midnight has come and gone again
leaving mixed emotions within
you loved me all night long
and left before the morning's dawn
we spent the long hours of the night
wrapped in lovers embrace that felt so right
the pleasure and ecstasy we explored
felt like a promise of so much more
but I awoke to find the sheets that burned so hot had now turned cold
and knew in my heart that you I would never again hold
off the bed, i begin to rise
with bittersweet tears in my eyes
I wonder if our paths will ever cross again
but I know we are better off in the end
midnight has come and gone again
leaving mixed emotions within
Published 28th Nov 2017
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28th Nov 2017 6:38am
I enjoyed your poem. pleasant style and interesting expression of emotion. I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep writing.
28th Nov 2017 10:55am
This is cool. Affection which was so great turned out to something. Oh gosh!. Well done
28th Nov 2017 1:30pm
I Love the setting you paint with midnight, mornings dawn,embrace,ecstasy.
"but I awoke to find the sheets that burned so hot had now turned cold" -heart wrenching,yet brings us back down from cloud 9 to the real world.
i feel i was flown on wings then grounded due to turbulent weather lol.
excellent poem ob-LIV-ious, keep'em coming.
"but I awoke to find the sheets that burned so hot had now turned cold" -heart wrenching,yet brings us back down from cloud 9 to the real world.
i feel i was flown on wings then grounded due to turbulent weather lol.
excellent poem ob-LIV-ious, keep'em coming.
28th Nov 2017 6:25pm
29th Nov 2017 3:28am
ob-LIV-ious!
Your depth and insight are a testament to your phenomenally perceptive mentality. "Midnight" offers light and reflection to the reality hidden by the fantasy of spontaneous passion!
Your depth and insight are a testament to your phenomenally perceptive mentality. "Midnight" offers light and reflection to the reality hidden by the fantasy of spontaneous passion!
30th Nov 2017 2:34am
beautiful storytelling
I love how it switches tones from hot to cold, joyful to emptiness
as if the spell was broken after midnight...keep them coming
WELCOME TO DUP
I love how it switches tones from hot to cold, joyful to emptiness
as if the spell was broken after midnight...keep them coming
WELCOME TO DUP
26th May 2018 2:24pm
23rd Jan 2019 4:52pm
Beautiful and passionate writing. If your story is true, I am sorry...
Thanks for sharing, Liv :)
Thanks for sharing, Liv :)
23rd Jan 2019 5:07pm
