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I Should Have
I should have known from the beginning
I should have known from the start
I should have known you'd be the one
I should have known you'd break my heart
I should have come up with a reason
I should have come up with an excuse
I should have come up with a way to keep from falling in love with you
I should have realized it wasn't real
I should have realized it wasn't true
I should have realized there was no way you'd be in love with me too
I should have realized things would change
I should have realized how you'd act
I should have known better than this
I should have never come back
I should have known from the start
I should have known you'd be the one
I should have known you'd break my heart
I should have come up with a reason
I should have come up with an excuse
I should have come up with a way to keep from falling in love with you
I should have realized it wasn't real
I should have realized it wasn't true
I should have realized there was no way you'd be in love with me too
I should have realized things would change
I should have realized how you'd act
I should have known better than this
I should have never come back
Published 19th Sep 2011
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19th Sep 2011 10:57pm
the mechanism you are using demands an ending. with your repetition you are anger. where is the solem trail off?
20th Sep 2011 1:49am
solemn trail off "I should have never come back" There's a whole story behind it so it'd probably be easier to understand it if the whole story was here. But thanks for the honest feedback.
23rd Sep 2011 4:35am
sorry i was a little drunk. what i meant (just my two cents) is that it feels like the ending should break from the i should pattern.
24th Sep 2011 4:08pm
