Stillborn

a beautifull little succinct emotion.
it cut to the core of me, baxter.

the last two lines from my side may be:
And I will remain so curious to know,
what lies beneath them.

may be or may not be but ignore them because they are just suggestions always. Beautiful.

The last verse is so cold and final it works as the perfect conclusion to what precedes it. A dark, insightful poem.

thank you jack and thanks everyone who commented and read my poem :)

by saying so little you said so very much
you kept it real kept it moving & other things of that such
simplicity is truly a special gift
because it allows continuous progress without any negative shift
no regrets no sorrow oh no nothing like that
just let the past remained passed...thats an awesome fact....

very cleverly done indeed!
what's done is done...a universal stand for done or undone..whether it is stillborns, neverborns, crookedly borns etc etc .

dimensions you offer in these many words..unparalled.

you spoil me :)
thank You!