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18th Sep 2011 10:05am
how you manage to say so much with so few words is really great.
you are becoming quite the master of your style
fair play to you!!
you are becoming quite the master of your style
fair play to you!!
20th Sep 2011 12:23pm
4th Oct 2011 1:14pm
Sad, sweet and sincere. As Eamon says you have a way with such few words. Well done.
4th Oct 2011 8:23pm
19th Nov 2011 4:58pm
Dense as dying star
breaking through the universe
of our sentiments
Your style reminds me one of my favorite Italian poets: "Salvatore Quasimodo." Maybe you will know one of his most famous poems. Short and intense as yours.
Everyone is alone on the heart of earth
pierced by a ray of sun:
and suddenly night falls
(Salvatore Quasimodo)
breaking through the universe
of our sentiments
Your style reminds me one of my favorite Italian poets: "Salvatore Quasimodo." Maybe you will know one of his most famous poems. Short and intense as yours.
Everyone is alone on the heart of earth
pierced by a ray of sun:
and suddenly night falls
(Salvatore Quasimodo)
19th Nov 2011 8:45pm
