Awoken (early moring craving)

oh beautiful H your lines are laced with longing..

feeling the chill of your bed without your lover..

"'Tis a shame I lay as corpse  
Accompanying  
Its cushioned mattress
Their softness no use  
With single body's heat to warm"

passionately expressed
could feel your ache..

love Crim
 

Thank you Crim, for feeling this piece

I always appreciate  your comments in showing
the understanding of the emotions behind my works :)

Love
H

"Awake
in cold and lonely breeze
Alone
in bed covered by sheets
Eyes are open, yet fail to see; "  - an open set of french doors that hang over a garden,a large frozen stone fountain below

longing for a touch; but is is familiar or new?

"'Tis a shame I lay as corpse  
Accompanying  
Its cushioned mattress
Their softness no use  
With single body's heat to warm" - waiting for another corpse to come along and bring each other back to life

"Feet are shivering  
Frozen in time of Fall's air
Calmness of chamber only amplifies
Saddens mine hollow heart  
Drowns mind to deepen a reminder; "  -a mirror falling in slow motion, breaking into a thousand pieces

"No one to wake up to
Come face to face
Not another's heat of breath
to breathe in....  
 
taste "  -the longing to taste another with eyes like mine

"I savor my own  
Overwhelmed with longing
Too aware and realize: " -  wandering empty streets as if to call out but scared for no one will answer back

"My soul's only presence
 I close my eyes and close the thoughts
Return to bitter sleep.. " - i walk as one among poppy flower fields, lay me down in a glass coffin.

white sleeping tablets and brown whiskey are no end for something as beautiful as this
 
"Slumber in pain of lonely daylight " -the night is the only one that warms these bones any longer

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fantastic poem SourMelon0313
rich imagery,style,and you cast a setting that's more beautiful than the last.
well penned

Dear Samael..!
You overwhelm me with overpowering compliment and creative, deep thoughts and visions..
I believe it is your vivid mind that sees such wonderful imagery within my woks

I greatly appreciate your wonderful critique, comment and time spent in my works.. :)

Again, thank you so much

Respects and Love,
H

there's a handful of poets on here that capture my imagination and run away with it, you are one of them. thanks for the great read, my Friday is coming together better than i had hoped.

I am honored to be :)
I hope to take your mind as far as I can
your words bring such support and warmth to me

So happy your Friday is turning better!
Hope it turns out even better and amazing  
Love
H

Yea...Yup...POETRY... :)

oh! the wonders of it!lol

Thank you poeticness,appreciate your time in my works and comment! You support brings me joy :)

Love
H

sad loneliness write - a perfect description of the coldness of that condition :-))))))

excellent ink :-))))

Thank you David sir, I greatly appreciate your kind words and time spent on my works :)

Love
H

the morning loneliness is a feeling I understand....that is when the sun shines and you wish to hold your one truly...the feeling of loss is profound with a fresh morning head...to turn over and wish the world wasn't so full of people while your room is so empty....

love always Jeff

Thank you dear Jeff
:)
I see you truly understand..
Hopefully one day the mornings won't feel so lonely anymore..

Love
H

Longing for another's embrace only to be kissed by the bitter loneliness... passionately and brilliantly expressed... I relate deeply with your words.

Thank you so much for your understanding and kind comment dear poetess :)

I greatly appreciate your time in my works..

Love
H