Now

Man...that was a strike to the heart...
you have such a way you fit the words into a perfect message so strong..

Nice

-H-

you said that so perfect Melon..  exactly ..

my hand laid across my little heart as it
was felt stribbling up

Thank you, Sour! Very kind of you!

Thank you, Sunset! Appreciative, as always!

A tragic truth and I feel it works on so many levels for me .. 👍👍 as usual  another great piece of art !!

That's quite a compliment! Thank you so much!

Good at it:

Living in the past is like ploughing a clear field.
 
Take life along with your sole,put aside the nows, let's live in the present, for future even is afraid of its content.

Well written.
With respect,
Lions_den

Thank you, Joshua! Very appreciative of your reading and commenting!

I dont know if this is a sad poem or not.

I don't know what readers may get out of ii, but my intention was to show two people in polite, but, strong disagreement and also to throw a satirical light on our conception of "now".

I loved this a lot Taki.
For me, personally, I relate this to something that transpired for me years ago.
At that time, the other person had mentally moved on.  
I was still mentally in the relationship.
Therefore my "now", was their "past"
Very nicely written !

Thank you, Lena! Always appreciative of your reads!... And, laugh, my dear, laugh!.... So much humor in pain...

so beautifully expressed
to be so harshly rebuffed
you make me want to reach out
& keep your heart safe..

powerful emotion stirred with this write..

love Crim

Thank you, Crim! I always appreciate your comments for making me think.

Wow bro. The ending left me wondering bout the license of that TRUCK that just hit me!! lol

Hahaha!... Don't worry Poet. I have insurance... Forever grateful, my friend, for touching on the (poem's) comedic aspect!

ouch - she's mean!